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Reviews For Jo's Mouth
Reviewer: nexter Signed 
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Date: June 06 2017 6:34 PM Title: Jo's Stupor
Author's Response: Easy to see which way you want this story to end, huh? You'll just have to wait and see... ;)
[Report This]Date: June 06 2017 6:34 PM Title: Jo's Stupor
"No negotiation, you're just a snack, you go back to my belly" game over for tiny man :D
Author's Response: Easy to see which way you want this story to end, huh? You'll just have to wait and see... ;)
Reviewer: SS944 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2017 8:59 PM Title: Jo's Stupor
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're liking the progression! There definitely seem to be two rival sides building up here, though; suppose there have been for quite a while. Does our courageous hero live, or does he end up getting gobbled up again by Jo? It's an interesting conundrum, to say the least, and having the power to decide which way it goes is tantalising; even though I'm fairly certain on the ending, What I may do, if the demand is great enough, is write the alternative ending as a separate chapter or story, just so nobody's disappointed. At the sane time, though, that does leave the ending a tad open to which side you believe... we'll see, we'll see. All will be revealed, my friend; and my utmost thanks for your continued kind words. :)
Date: June 05 2017 8:59 PM Title: Jo's Stupor
I am so happy how you have this going. Although I do believe he's going to end up getting eaten for good though. Which is sad, but it's how most stories will end. I do hope Jo might be like, "He survived all this, he deserves to live. " but she seems like the person who would just swallow him and be like, "Try doing it again. I wanna be sober to experience your grand escape! " in any event, I'm throughly pleased and glad you are a writer. Phenomenal work.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're liking the progression! There definitely seem to be two rival sides building up here, though; suppose there have been for quite a while. Does our courageous hero live, or does he end up getting gobbled up again by Jo? It's an interesting conundrum, to say the least, and having the power to decide which way it goes is tantalising; even though I'm fairly certain on the ending, What I may do, if the demand is great enough, is write the alternative ending as a separate chapter or story, just so nobody's disappointed. At the sane time, though, that does leave the ending a tad open to which side you believe... we'll see, we'll see. All will be revealed, my friend; and my utmost thanks for your continued kind words. :)