[Report This]Date: February 06 2017 8:41 PM Title: Jo
Great idea never considered how a story centered on a mouth could be. Amazing I'll be eagerly awaiting every update.
Author's Response: Glad to know you're enjoying it! Don't worry, I intend to update it as often as I can :)
[Report This]Date: February 06 2017 1:49 PM Title: Jo's Breath
Absolutely incredible, loved it :) I hope you continue. I adored the belch, very descriptive! Perhaps it's asking a lot given the overall theme of the story, but would you ever consider doing a fart chapter? I feel your style would lend itself very well to that kind of chapter. At any rate, I look forward to whatever you come up with next!
Author's Response: Glad you're liking it! I'll be honest with you, I honestly doubt our protagonist will be spending any time with Jo's rear this story, but I'll certainly keep your recommendation in mind for any future stories I may write. Apologies for that, but I appreciate the continued support regardless. :)
[Report This]Date: February 02 2017 6:18 PM Title: Jo's Breath
10 and a cum from me. Love the detail and pacing. I'm guessing this is not going to be a short story?
Author's Response: Excellent to hear you're so invested! As to your question, no, this is gonna be a long one- not sure exactly how long, but easily above ten chapters, maybe even breaking twenty, depending. I can imagine that a whole long story solely focusing on mouth play may drive off some people, but hey, for people like us in the mouthplay-odour niche it's a fun ride, right?
Date: February 02 2017 9:32 AM Title: Jo's Intentions
She's aware of him, his fetish, and she's annoyed by it? Wow, what a twist! Seriously I don't think I've seen this type of entrapment premise before. Kudos. I hope that staying in her mouth for the day includes surviving the night while she sleeps XP Hang in there bugman! Survive and maybe she will let you stay in there XD
Author's Response: Yeah, I suppose it's pretty unique in that she knows about his fetish, or even that it's mentioned. I tend to find that's a bit more uncommon round here. As for surviving the night, I honestly hadn't considered that... but it's certainly on the cards now. Ooh, I can feel the ideas coming to me as I write this... As for staying in there.... I think our little guy nay have had his fill for mouths for life after this. But who knows? Nothing's set in stone yet..... ;)
Date: February 01 2017 7:38 PM Title: Jo
First off, I want to say the first two chapters are off to an amazing start. I personally really enjoy mouth play especially with things your'e playing around with. Absolutely love everything you're playing in the future and hope to see more of this story in the future. I hope our hero explores more than just Jo's mouth. Swallowing maybe?
Author's Response: Glad to hear you're enjoying it! It's always great to hear back such positive feedback; especially since this is my first story on here.
As for our tiny protagonist, I've left the prospect of disappearing down Jo's gullet open. It wasn't originally on the cards, but if enough people ask for it, then maybe he's in for more than he bargained.....maybe. I wouldn't want to spoil the story this early in! :P
Date: January 31 2017 7:57 PM Title: Jo
This story has EXCELLENT potential. We have a good deal of details about this mouth and we haven't even gotten close to it yet. That [Odor] tag has me excited too, not enough stories portray things like bad breath. A coffee drinker and a smoker AND it's first thing in the morning? Really looking forward to what that maw is like on the inside. Your description of the breakfast bar makes it sound like you are super tiny, hope he get's to suffer in the mouth for a bit before getting swallowed. Will probably review again on some other chapter ;)
Author's Response:
Glad to know you like the story! I think you'll be most pleased with what I have planned out for this story; the odor tag wasn't added for no reason. I totally agree with you, when it comes to mouth play I think that not enough stories portray the full reality of what being in a mouth would actually be like, in all its facets. With this story, I hope to explore said facets in full; each chapter is gonna be a different scenario of my little protagonist either interacting with or dealing with trials within Jo's mouth. Not to spoil you, but Chapter 3 might be breath related... you'll have to wait and see. ;)
As for swallowing, well, as Jo put it so eloquently herself... we'll cross that bridge when we come to it.
Thanks for reviewing! -Aj