[Report This]Date: March 03 2017 3:52 PM Title: Meeting
Years later, still my absolute favorite.
Date: October 30 2012 7:44 PM Title: Exploration
Love the story, hope you decide to finish it.
Date: September 19 2012 12:32 PM Title: Exploration
That was a really nice story and I think it ended at just the right moment, even if I would have liked it to have been longer.
Date: September 19 2012 12:18 PM Title: Dream
There could be more description of their emotions an actions, though I still enjoyed the chapter very much, so thanks for sharing.
Date: September 19 2012 12:08 PM Title: Meeting
Gosh, I hope rick will be alright.
Date: August 07 2008 2:13 PM Title: Meeting
Quite a good story, SilverFlame - your descriptions are top-notch, and your attention to realism and detail is laudable. I hope you'll continue this!
[Report This]Date: February 02 2008 9:33 PM Title: Meeting
Hoooooooly God, that is pretty much the cutest thing I have ever read. Please, by all means, keep it up.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2008 4:43 PM Title: Exploration
A very good chapter.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2008 2:56 PM Title: Exploration
Refreshingly--and tastefully--understated love scene. Bravo!
[Report This]Date: February 02 2008 2:52 PM Title: Dream
I'm voting for some kind of VR experiment in mind-linkage. But, going straight to chapter three is the only way to tell. So...
[Report This]Date: February 02 2008 6:35 AM Title: Dream
Wow, very entertaining. Keep it up; I hope to see more!
Date: February 02 2008 5:50 AM Title: Dream
A very nice start! I can just see Rick ending up beneath Naomi's feet, too. ;)
Here's hoping you feel inspired to write more, and soon! :D
[Report This]Date: February 02 2008 1:08 AM Title: Dream
Been a long time.
I hope to see more soon befor next year i hope. Am just jokeing with you.
Good job keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Y-y-yes sir, I'll get the next chapter up soon, I promise!
Actually, I have Chapter 3 almost done already, so expect that up very soon.
And thank you!
[Report This]Date: January 28 2008 2:45 PM Title: Meeting
Wow! And, here, I thought "Naomi" would turn out to be Jill's screen name. Good plot twist; and, this is only the first chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I've recently discovered that I'm quite in love with plot twists, so hopefully you'll see some more throughout this story!
Date: August 02 2007 11:40 PM Title: Meeting
Must Say I like what I have read, Kinda hope the violence isn't between Naomi and Rick though. All I can do is spectate though, otherwise very well writen and I enjoyed what you have done so far please continue^_^
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. While I wish I could give out more of the plot and either remove your fears or just further them, it wouldn't be very good of me to do that. I'm glad you enjoy the story!
[Report This]Date: July 30 2007 1:48 AM Title: Meeting
Very good hope to see more chapters soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to get them out soon.
[Report This]Date: July 29 2007 11:49 PM Title: Meeting
Very intriguing beginning. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm pleased that you like it so far!