[Report This]Date: June 11 2018 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 6: To Err is Human
Was re-readning this story again and see that it is now listed as completed. Guess that sums up if her survived or not some how. Looking forward to your next entrey in this series
[Report This]Date: May 27 2018 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True
Loved the story, especially all the details about being small and her slight cruelty towards him. Can't wait to see what you do next. Keep up the good work
Date: May 25 2018 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 6: To Err is Human
Awesome story, but like other readers, the ending seems very out of place. Was on pace to maybe go down as my favorite story on this site. Would have liked to see the action extend out a bit more, or at least Jacob not go out via vore.
Have you considered an alternative ending (or endings) by any chance? I was thinking something like this: last chapter happens as planned and Sara tricks Jacob into shrinking. She shares how she is going to kill him, but before she steps on him, she decides that he'd enjoy it too much and ends up giving him to Justine to torture. Justine ends up torturing him a bit with her feet as revenge, and comes up with a plan to get rid of him. Next time she's at Lauren's house, she leaves him there (stuck in one of her shoes or something), to be found by Lauren. Lauren is freaked out when she finds him, and now even more grossed out plus mad at what he did to Sara, decides to crush him underfoot.
Great story nonetheless. Look forward for more similar stories.
Date: May 21 2018 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 6: To Err is Human
I don't want this to seem like a negative review, because it's not meant to be, but I didn't really enjoy this latest chapter, Chapter 6. It wasn't the content or subject matter, it was more of the speed at which it was presented. It felt like it didn't really fit with the way the rest of the story has been written up to this point, and a bit rushed.
I'm almost always opposed to this, but in this case I'm actually hoping the next chapter begins with Jacob waking up and realizing the events of the last chapter were a dream, haha
But whatever happens, it's your story, and you've got to write it however you feel is right. I'll still be along for the ride, whevever it goes, and even if I don't like how things end, I'll still be appreciative for the chapters that I did greatly enjoy!
[Report This]Date: May 21 2018 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 6: To Err is Human
Jacob is such a dumbass. He keeps pissing everybody off, I think he deserves everything that got to him.
Also, thanks for writing! I still enjoyed the story!
[Report This]Date: May 20 2018 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 6: To Err is Human
Hopefully this isn't the end, I'm still enjoying this story. No idea how Jacob is gonna survive though.
Date: May 20 2018 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True
Loved the story until the ending. Bleh. I know that the story isn't completed, but I'm not gonna be reading anymore chapters. At least put up some violent or digestion tags or something.
Date: May 20 2018 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 2: Work of Art
For such a great story, the ending ruined it. To write like you have and then turn her into a cannibal and a murderer is just stupid in my opinion. Far too many stories end this way and it makes no sense. It's beneath your abilities.
I apologize if I'm being too harsh but that was such a letdown.
Date: May 14 2018 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True
Loved your first story, loving your second keep it up.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2018 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True
It seems Jacob is really trying to get in bad graces with the girls, but at least it seems to work out everytime. Being put in a cage on a beatiful girl is barely somehting to complain about.
Thank you for writing and until next time!
[Report This]Date: May 12 2018 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True
The best story I've read on here for ages. You really sell the size difference and I love that you aren't just concentrating on feet. I loved the cage idea. Something which very few writer's explore. I'm really hoping you don't have it ending in core as I just never buy that in stories. It makes no sense to me when ppl become cannibalistic in giantess.
Anyway, keep it up. Absolutely brilliant so far.
Date: May 12 2018 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 5: Cheaters Never Prosper
Really great addition, and this story continues to be great. I'm really curious to see what happens next, if he talks to Mandy again, or if he continues to see Sara once school is over. And if the pic gets accidentally sent out or something. Good stuff, can't wait for more
Date: May 08 2018 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True
Absolutely loving this. The writing and descriptions are great
Date: May 07 2018 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True
One of the best stories!! Would love to see some pussy insertion
[Report This]Date: May 06 2018 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 3: Three's a Crowd
This has been really great so far, and the introduction of the 2 new characters makes things even better. I like how Sara seems to be growing into a wingman character for Jacob.
Looks like the next chapter will be very interesting.
Take care and good job!
[Report This]Date: May 06 2018 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True
Excellent story thus far!
Date: May 05 2018 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 3: Three's a Crowd
This Story keeps gettin better Every chapter
[Report This]Date: May 05 2018 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: Dream Come True
Jacob really ruined his relation with Sara didn't he
I think he should be a bit nicer next time.
Thank you for writing this story, and as the first reviewer states, not having a first chapter with no action that stopped on a cliffhanger really hooked me into the story from the beginning.
[Report This]Date: May 02 2018 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: Work of Art
Loving this story, can't wait for the next chapter
Date: May 02 2018 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: Work of Art
Awesome chapter