Reviews For The DownSizer: Origins
Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2018 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 2: Work of Art
Date: May 20 2018 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 2: Work of Art
For such a great story, the ending ruined it. To write like you have and then turn her into a cannibal and a murderer is just stupid in my opinion. Far too many stories end this way and it makes no sense. It's beneath your abilities.
I apologize if I'm being too harsh but that was such a letdown.
Reviewer: blackairow Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2018 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: Work of Art
Date: May 02 2018 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: Work of Art
Loving this story, can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2018 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: Work of Art
Date: May 02 2018 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: Work of Art
Awesome chapter