Date: May 26 2018 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Arrival
Very cool chapter.
Date: May 26 2018 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Arrival
This is only the second time in my whole life I use this account... and the first one was when I contacted my all-time favourite GTS writer to offer him a free art request (here you can see my stuff on Twitter: https://twitter.com/LabbaArt); and guess what? I'm using it again now to tell you that this story is beautiful, not to mention my favourite ongoing one involving shrinking!
Especially because we seem to be into the same stuff: micro, unaware, voluntary shrinking and life-threatening situations!~ Keep up the good work!
Also... if I ever have the time to draw a cover for your story, will you give me your permission to do so?
Author's Response:
Cool, thanks for the compliments! Love your art too, keep up the good work. If you drew a cover, I'd be flattered.
[Report This]Date: May 26 2018 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Arrival
I adore the idea of people shrinking down and travelling by mail, and 1/8th of an inch is such a fun size for this scenario! I really like the tension built in the latest chapter, with the threat of sisterly revenge. The unaware aspect so far is great, and I hope you explore it a bit more befor they get discovered. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the story from here. I'd love to see maybe some underarm or cleavage torture for our tiny protagonists, whether by accident or Grace indulging her cruel desires.
[Report This]Date: May 25 2018 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Arrival
Good stuff
Date: May 24 2018 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
You started started story perfectly.
I dont know about others . But you chose very small size for our couple. I believe it should around 1/2 inch. Mean noticable .more important feeel-able.
As u r into feet thing more ..1/8 is nothing to feel in feet .
Else you are a good writer .
Date: May 22 2018 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Shrinking
Monica was cool.
Date: May 22 2018 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Shrinking
Great Story! Keep up the great work and I cant wait to read what happnes next. I have a feeling that Monica mails them to the wrong place or that maybe the sister is unaware that they are coming. good plot though.
Author's Response:
You called it. Good guessing.
[Report This]Date: May 22 2018 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
Glad you're back to writing again! Great story so far, looking forward to more. You're one of the best writers on this site. Keep it up!
P.S. I hope that "R" rating turns to an "X"?? :D
Author's Response:
Thanks. We'll see...
Date: May 22 2018 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Shrinking
Absolutey love this story!!!! Great start! It's pretty unique to have a couple shrinking story, in wich it is f/f and f/m, it's awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope some foot related stuff :)
Date: May 22 2018 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
Great beginning. I'm interested.
Date: May 22 2018 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
honestly i think more people should write how you do and not complain about simple stories. Simple but very descriptive stories are great. You will 'nail' it, excuse the pun. Never leave out any detail that comes to you.
Date: May 21 2018 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
I can't wait for the next chapter! You're one of my favourite authors :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hopefully, I can finish it up in the next two weeks.
Date: May 21 2018 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
I love this plot idea! I don't know what you're planning yet, but I'm excited to find out. I would love to see the tinies end up between the sister's toes at some point. Or maybe end up on a seat where the giant sister sits on them?
Whatever happens, looking forward to it.