[Report This]Date: December 25 2019 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The room
I just discovered this story and read it all in one go. Ann is a fantastic giantess! This was a psychological thrill ride from the very beginning. Watching her go from wanting to remain strong for the tinies to then eating them was very well written. And it was paced just right to be believable. Definitely hope you continue this one.
Author's Response:
Thanks man! I wanted to focus a lot on her psyche, and personally i really like as well how i structured the whole thing, so i'm happy that you appreciate it!
While this is my favourite story i've written, i don't really have the inspiration to continue right now. In time i'll surely update it!
Date: August 07 2019 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: The room
It's wonderful news to see this story back. I thought you just grow tired of it, longing for new chapters :)
Date: January 05 2019 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: The room
Cool story!
I have to admit, I first checked out the reviews before reading the actual story and I read things like ‘poor english’ and ‘terrible writing skills’.
After that, I expected the worst, but it was far better than that!
English is also not my first language, so I feel your struggles.
But its good! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I often feel like an idiot when i speak or write in another language, i'm always assuming i'm going to mess up either the grammar or the spelling or whatever, so it's nice to hear that it's not that bad!
Thanks again, i will!
Date: January 05 2019 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: The room
26 little men the size of 5 centimeters would be like the equivalent of a thick beefsteak. She just coudn't help it! But now that she ate all those people, will she develop any complex? Will she develop a superiority complex or would she still feel bad about herself, the monster she became.
She loosened up about death, she killed her own friends in a raptus. Poor Dan offered himself like a lamb. I think she'll feel kinda bad later on and that she will switch between depression and homicidal.
How many little people are left inside the room? Do you intend to count menstruations in your story? Cuz starvation leads to period issues.
Author's Response:
I'll be frank, i have yet to decide how she is going to get over her sudden killing spree (which, mind you, was a consequence of the extreme stress on her psyche).
The two main ways i'm seeing are either she rejects her human and kind side and stops to consider the tinies as living beings in order to survive (which is interesting because only children and Rick are left in the room, even if she casts aside her feelings, is she going to be able to devour them without second thoughts?), or she starts to hate herself and refuses to eat any more people, but in the end inevitably succumbs to her hunger once again?
I've yet to decide.
The tinies left exactly 20 children and Rick. Add the first accident, the fake pedophile, Al and those 26 poor souls and you have in totality the 50 initial tinies.
I'll be honest, i was totally unaware of the issue you mentioned. The more you know i guess
Author's Response:
I'll be frank, i have yet to decide how she is going to get over her sudden killing spree (which, mind you, was a consequence of the extreme stress on her psyche).
The two main ways i'm seeing are either she rejects her human and kind side and stops to consider the tinies as living beings in order to survive (which is interesting because only children and Rick are left in the room, even if she casts aside her feelings, is she going to be able to devour them without second thoughts?), or she starts to hate herself and refuses to eat any more people, but in the end inevitably succumbs to her hunger once again?
I've yet to decide.
The tinies left exactly 20 children and Rick. Add the first accident, the fake pedophile, Al and those 26 poor souls and you have in totality the 50 initial tinies.
I'll be honest, i was totally unaware of the issue you mentioned. The more you know i guess
Date: December 29 2018 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: The room
This:
"Their voice doesn’t get squeaky..."
I believe is incorrect.
From Wikipedia:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Voice_frequency
The voiced speech of a typical adult male will have a fundamental frequency from 85 to 180 Hz, and that of a typical adult female from 165 to 255 Hz.
So, if we take a 5 foot 10 inch man, he'd be about 178 cm tall. Shrink him to 5 cm tall, then he is now 0.0281 of his original height. That means that the wavelengths involved in making his voice will all be reduced by that same factor. The frequency is the inverse of that factor so, his frequencies will go up by a factor of 35.56.
If we take the low end of his normal voice as 85 Hz and multiply that by 35.56, we get 3022.6 Hz which is rather squeaky.
This video puts out a tone of 3022 Hz.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d08SmFKhO7Q
For comparison, this is 6000 Hz which would be the frequency near the upper end of speech (180 * 35.56 = 6400.8)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nyZhQj0k7-s
So, in the end, his voice would be quite a bit higher in pitch.
Author's Response: Yes, i’m aware of the issue. If we keep on thinking that way, a tiny human wouldn’t even be able to survive for more than a few second, for a hundred different reasons. My point was that since 100% scientific accuracy is not possible, i explained how those phenomena worked (or didn’t work) in this specific, fictional world. In particular, i don’t like the idea of the tinies having such a ridiculous voice, it feels comical and definitely not necessary. But don’t mind me, it’a just my autistic self rambling about something minir
Date: December 28 2018 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: The room
Yo I love this. It's like a time bomb to Ann's conscience, waiting for her morale to break, and everything going downhill from there. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks! I just love the concept of a gentle giantess who is forced to hurt or murder little people, and the psychological implications of it.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2018 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: The room
"...fear". Oh I love it! That moment when the seemingly maternal giantess realizes she has so much power over the tinies and the idea of "vore" pops into her head. It will be entertainning to see who brings up vore first, the tinies amoungst themselves or if she points it out. Do people start to mysteriously disappear and the tinies take notice when they sleep? It's always exciting to see how a caring and humane figure is pushed to the edge with hunger and how she can bring herself to do something like this (hunger will drive anyone insane!).
Then the last ones are alive are perhaps her closest friends and Al... competing for life...
I am really excited to see where you will take this. I am hooked!
Date: December 27 2018 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: The room
Here I see a sort of Stanford prison experiment! Finally someone came up with this idea :D
Author's Response:
Thanks! It has been a while since i came up with the idea and wondered why there were so few stories with a similar concept, so i tried to give it a shot with my terrible english and poor writing skills.
My aim is to take a realistic approach for the character developement, to make the story feel plausible