Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2019 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 6: Judge and Executioner

I really like this concept. I'm curious about the people who kidnapped Ann, her friends, and the other people. Who are they? What's their motives behind shrinking everyone but Ann? Who was that particular girl in chapter 2 who seemed to be watching Ann and the shrinkees? You already got your readers expecting something in future chapters which is a good thing and now with two people in her stomach, we see Ann is on her way to possibly losing herself to hunger and perhaps, goddesshood? 

 

A genius concept. I look forward to more. By the way, I couldn't help but notice the round-robin icon on your story. Do you plan on letting other people take over your story or is that just a mistake? Just curious.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll be frank, i didn't think much about the captors, i simply used them to build the scenario i had in mind. I thought that the girl watching them was basically the reader, but if you want i can try to expand on them.

 

Oh no, it was just a stupid mistake, i already edited it, thank you for pointing it out!