Date: February 18 2020 9:15 AM Title: The Big Day
Really hoping for another chapter. I love this series and concept so much. This and Hidden Worlds are the two best stories on here. Please please keep going with this! What’s in the box???
Date: August 05 2019 5:05 AM Title: The Big Day
Sorry! Totally thought I hit send on my review days ago, looks like it never showed up! Loved this chapter! It really made me want to see what's in the box! Thinking back to where we know Zayna was last, I can only imagine where she ended up!! Must have been an hours long ordiel for her this last chapter! Hopefully we get some real slow motion descriptions of these scenes, I'd love to see all this from her point of view and what's running in her head! You are a fantastic writer and I don't mean to rush you. If every one of your chapters comes out as good as they have been I'd want you to take your time for quality over quantity. Don't feel rushed because of us, I know Ill be patiently waiting till the end of time for more of these chapters :)
Date: July 29 2019 6:40 PM Title: The Big Day
We still love your story and would love to hear more from it! Get that writting bug back and share your talet with us! You're so good at this keep it up! :)
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy the next chapter, though it is a little shorter I feel. Thanks for the kind words!
Date: July 16 2019 2:49 AM Title: The Big Day
Man, this a really good story! Keep it up :)
Author's Response:
I appreciate it. The hard part is just finding time to write, I am also enjoying the story.
Date: July 01 2019 2:04 PM Title: The Big Day
You havn't forgotten us have you? I've been checking daily for an update and I'm scared you've gone the way of Oops' story and stopped updating. Say it isn't so! You're so talented at this
Author's Response:
Still alive and well, and plan on continuing. Just had a life event and working to get back into some sort of rhythm. Once I do ill get some additional chapters out. Just may be slow rolling, sorry bout that.
Date: June 26 2019 11:04 AM Title: The Big Day
Off the top of my head I can think of a few things. Maybe Z ordered a microscopic city or something to better understand subhuman culture. Like an ant farm but a mini city instead. Just thinking about Rachel's power trip over that drives me wild. Or maybe it's a tiny communicater or microscope type thing that lets her see subhumans clearly. Imagine her looking at the subhumans on her body, seeing her distorted body huge against their backs.
[Report This]Date: June 21 2019 12:58 PM Title: The Big Day
Love it so much! It would be a shame if she wasn’t even recognized when her friend began trying to bring her back after everything :3
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! I have some intersting plans, and will continue to try and throw curballs in the story. Planning on keeping it unaware for sure.
Date: June 19 2019 6:54 AM Title: The Big Day
So, i responded to a review, made a bunch of spelling errors, tried to delete the reply and ended up delting the review lol. Not sure I know how to work this site sometimes. To the person who's review I deleted Im sorry. I was going to say thanks so much for the feedback! I'm glad I could match the energy of the other story. Here's to planning on finishing this one.
Date: June 18 2019 11:17 PM Title: The Big Day
Starting out nicely.
And i can only imagine that testing suit could turn into a problem in the future :P
Author's Response:
Its definitely possible. Not sure to wuat extent, but we'll see. Thanks for the review :)