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Summary:

David introduces the idea of giantism to his best friend Melanie, who then, after finding a magical book of untold power, decides to act out on those new ideas. A story unfolds of epic amounts, spanning 6 years of writing and lots of fan interaction. Follow David and Melanie as their relationship grows and as Melanie experiments with her new found powers.
--HK

 

I am in the process of updating this story; so if you want to see the best, wait for it under the FinalEdition!


Rated: PG
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play, Vore Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 82337 Read: 238785
Published: September 03 2010 Updated: April 20 2011
Story Notes:

UPDATED [04/12/11] - We're getting closer and closer every day, with this newest update we have seen a total of 65% of the novel edited and a whopping 120 thousand words of new content. We're expecing to finish somewhere mid May, stay tuned for anything new, and please email us if you have any questions! (Allow a few days for us to respond please!)

A little about the changes you'll see in this final edition of the story:

  • I've reworked most of the book, done a lot of editing, and removed and added a lot of content. So you'll basically have to reread it all, and it'll be like rereading a whole new story!
  • There are only 10 Chapters, and the chapters do not have names
  • There is a Prologue and Epilogue, Opening and Closing Remarks.
  • I have added over 100 pages of NEW content, which includes somewhere along the lines of an additional 30-40 THOUSAND words never before read on the internet.
  • New vore scenes and increased character depth!
  • Plot line has been reworked and the characters are now dynamic, instead of static.
  • Full Colour Cover Art, front and back.
  • Inked Chapter Cover's included within the book.
  • 10 Fully inked cover images for each of the book's 10 chapters, each one unique and never released online.
  • Chapter 1 was deleted and rewritten from scratch, it is now 280% longer as well, and makes a lot more sense.
  • Tons of Grammer Problems, Spelling Mistakes, and Plot Holes all fixed!
  • Some continuity issues have been removed, and others explained.

Contained here in the following pages is Draft 3 of the story. The changes mentioned above are included only in Draft 5, and will never appear on the internet! Please contact us if you are interested in learning more.


ralf_wolfs[at]yahoo[dot]com

--TFK

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The opening of the book, describing that the world is not always as it appears.

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Please email us! We want to hear from YOU, our readers/fans!

All our hearts go out to Japan in these hard times.

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Good luck Japan!

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If you play City of Heroes look us up! @Korhal on Virtue!
--TFK

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We have finally published our blog (even though it's been up for months) and are going to link to it now. Do visit it if you are a fan of this or any of our works! It even has a preview of what the final draft will look like!

Link: http://therealm-novels.blogspot.com/

--TFK

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We've gotten a lot of hits on our blog and even a few votes on our polls! We're going to need more interest in the book though before we go and print any coppies; but it will come! It's only a matter of time.

Link: http://therealm-novels.blogspot.com/
--TFK

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New announcement on our blog!

http://therealm-novels.blogspot.com/

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.