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Summary:

Step into the story of the young protagonist Neil. Who is just entering high school for the first time and in many ways learning the responsibilities that come with growing up. He will experience each of the seven sins first hand and have a serious decision to make at the climax. Feedback and reviews are not only encouraged, they will also affect how the story turn's out.


Rated: X
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Growing Woman, Humiliation Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 6462 Read: 33556
Published: August 27 2011 Updated: September 02 2011
Story Notes:

I plan to have 8 chapters and alter the other's as I slowly develop the plot more. Please give any pointers, critique, and criticism, that you can.

1. Chapter 1 - Invidia by openwings227 [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarhalf-star (1857 words)

Invidia: The Latin word for Envy, it mean's to have an unhealthy obsession for something or (more importantly) someone.

2. Chapter 2 - Acedia by openwings227 [Reviews - 0] (1539 words)

Acedia: The Latin word for Sloth. Sloth is one of the most misundestood of the seven sins. It's true definition is failure to utilize one's full potential. For example if someone should avoid an issue rather then addressing it.

3. Chapter 3 - Luxuria by openwings227 [Reviews - 1] (1863 words)

Luxuria: The Latin word for Lust. Which is another term for physical attration. It is considered sinful when it is placed above love and devotion.

4. Chapter 4 - Gula by openwings227 [Reviews - 1] (1203 words)

Gula: The Latin word for Gluttony. Not to be confused with greed or lust, gluttony is the act of over indulging in your desires. Like eating a huge amount of food. (Instead of WANTING a lot of food which would be greed)