Penname: Jay-Bug [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: February 23 2011
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Things just keep happening.


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Tutoring by newschool2626 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary: Nick is about to learn what place he'll have in the world if he can't pass his math class.
Categories: Adult 30-39, Butt, Feet, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21045 Read Count: 178148
[Report This] Published: February 21 2011 Updated: March 03 2013
Reviewer: Jay-Bug Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Daydreaming

There's something about certain authors who write this sort of thing that allow them to instill a very powerful sensuality into their writing, even with very few words. I don't know what that thing is, but you certainly seem to have it.

If you don't get many comments on this story, don't assume it's because of some fault of yours, and then become discouraged. We all just finished our guilty pleasures before we got a chance to review it.

Summary:

Cameron's a tiny little man in the service of a beautiful, mischievous giantess. To earn his keep with her, occasionally he has to perform certain "groundskeeping" functions.


Categories: Humiliation, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Scat, Slave, Couples
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21545 Read Count: 53443
[Report This] Published: March 17 2012 Updated: February 26 2018
Reviewer: Jay-Bug Signed
Date: February 28 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This story totally rules.



Author's Response:

I'm very glad you liked it. It was just a funny idea to me, and it cracks me up that it can be a series, but it speaks to some people so it'll go on. What would you want to see in the future?

Summary:

A young man inexplicably wakes up one day to an alternate world ruled by massive, powerful women. Everyday life becomes a struggle as he learns to cope with his lowly position in this new matriarchal society. Eventually, he develops a romantic relationship with his gorgeous high school teacher.

 


Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Mature (40-49), Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40354 Read Count: 596452
[Report This] Published: June 01 2012 Updated: March 05 2015
Reviewer: Jay-Bug Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've never been a huge fan of non-insect/non-micro size difference, but this story is turing me around on it.  Phenomenally written, and well thought out.  I hope you continue!

Summary:

To all things a season. Devon just couldn't let Jules go. 

 

Disclaimer: This is a work of pure fiction. All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Crush, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10132 Read Count: 4007
[Report This] Published: July 23 2017 Updated: July 23 2017
Reviewer: Jay-Bug Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a perfect exploration of active, directed cruelty.  You tapped into the vein of it enough that it actually started to bring personal fears and anxieties up to the surface in me, not to mention some memories of past lovers.  I've been in the macro community long enough to know that a story this thoughtful will probably go unappreciated, but you've really written something fantastic.  Sacher-Masoch would be proud.

Also, you might want to make the size-roles clear in the story description.  There are def readers who would want to know if a story involves a giant man ahead of time.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the review and compliment. I had to Google who that was and wow, thank you. I'm glad you appreciated the tone and goal of the story,  I agree most people would have liked a warning but I felt it was important to be unexpected to fit with the overall tone of helplessness. 

The next story I post will most likey be much more straight forward and more clearly marked.

 Thanks again.

Summary:

A direct, compact story about a missing sibling and the musings of a Scorpion. Woe to the Toad.

 

Disclaimer: This is a work of pure fiction. All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended


Categories: Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2580 Read Count: 2912
[Report This] Published: July 27 2017 Updated: July 27 2017
Reviewer: Jay-Bug Signed
Date: July 30 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, f'real, are you my long lost twin or something?  I am literally in the middle of writing a story that makes a passing reference to the scorpion and frog tale.

(Actually, it was initially the scorpion and turtle, but scorpion and frog allows for a particularly amphibious lietmotif, tying in the 'frogs who wanted a king' fable.)

Eitherway, great story.  More straightforward than your previous work, but not any less intense for it, nor any less competent in exploring cruelty.  I like how you include the societal structures that allow for things like this to occur, particularly the implied apathy by a lack of true effort by the powers that be, even in spite of advocacy groups, etc.  It adds a particular sense of verisimilitude, especially compared to real world issues like homelessness.

Also, my real name is Jeremy, which usually doesn't get much play in stories, so it's nice to see that.

On the constructive criticism side, two things stick out.  One, your use of possessive apostrophes is not always consistent or correct (i.e., in the penultimate paragraph, humanities should be humanity's, societies should be society's, girls’ should be girl's, etc.).  Nothing a little proofreading can't fix.

Two, and this is maybe just me nitpicking, but calling infatuation with personal gratification a 'new' religion is a little weird.  In recent history, and in the US, at least, the personal gratification train has been running on all cylinders since the 1980's.  I suppose you can make an argument about modern life accelerating it though?  I don't know, maybe this falls under personal taste.

Hair to Toe by Scrumptious Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A man and his hairdresser engage in a dare.
Categories: Vore, Giantess, Feet, Growing Woman, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16280 Read Count: 45286
[Report This] Published: March 01 2018 Updated: January 28 2020
Reviewer: Jay-Bug Signed
Date: June 13 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Bets Are On

Damn, this is absolitely awesome, and very thoughtfully written.

Summary:

Jacob is paired with Sara to complete a math assignment. It's rather mundane and boring until he notices that she has a special machine in her house. A shrinking machine that was rumoured to be in development. Jacob suddenly wonders if his biggest fantasy could come true?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: DownSizer Universe
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46383 Read Count: 58532
[Report This] Published: April 27 2018 Updated: May 20 2018
Reviewer: Jay-Bug Signed
Date: April 30 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dream Come True

I'm usually into raw cruelty, but lately I've been all about giant ladies being teases and flirts.  Loving this so far.

Summary:

Fit girls in leggings tease and torture ant-size men.

 

My first story after lurking for a while. Indulging some, let's say, particular fantasies of mine. Hope it's somewhat enjoyable for folks...


Categories: Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9668 Read Count: 52120
[Report This] Published: June 04 2018 Updated: October 09 2018
Reviewer: Jay-Bug Signed
Date: June 06 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story totally rules.  The way you portray playful cruelty is a joy to read.



Author's Response:

Thank you! That means a lot coming from you.

Summary:

Marissa's ready to travel for spring break, but a small distrurbance at her feet in the airport is already threatening to throw off her good mood. Luckily for her, she knows just how to deal with such a situation.

Featuring an illustration!


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Footwear
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 787 Read Count: 5359
[Report This] Published: August 23 2020 Updated: August 23 2020
Reviewer: Jay-Bug Signed
Date: August 23 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Toetally Traveling

Short, sweet, and totally perf! Love it dude!



Author's Response:

Thanks man! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D