Reviewer: Thornton Signed
Date: November 22 2015
Title: Chapter 1: A Small Introduction, of Sorts . . .
I'm hoping to see this get darker. I do like the dominant tiny thing you have going on with Val, and I think my favourite word in the whole thing so far is Ravenette. It's so simple yet descriptive, so thank you, I'll be stealing that.
In relation to the storyline and ideas for torment, it's of absolutely no surprise that I'm very much a fan of the 'butt' category, but I won't write out a whole paragraph on what I'd exactly like you to write, instead, I'll just throw in the comment that I'd like it to happen to the British girl. Not because I'm Irish... just, because.
Lastly, if you are the type that actually detests writing about ass. Can I request you do your best, and in return I'll write a story / chapter to your specifications.
Author's Response: I love the "dominant tiny" device myself, and it does come up in a few of my other works. Currently on the back burner is an AU story set in "Silent Dance" . . . and I'm gonna shut up there so that fans of the series don't jump down my throat to finish that.
Ravenette is a word I stumbled across accidentally. Turns out an old word for "blond" is "goldette", and so I wondered how it would work for other hair colors. When it came to describing my own black hair, I settled on ravenette because I'm a special snowflake, dammit. XD
Butt stuff, with Penny. Got it.
It's not that I don't like that kind of content, I just . . . suck at it. You can read "Light and Dark" for more details, but I've just never been good at certain types of content. I love feet, and yet if you asked me to write a foot-based story I'd be terrible at it. The only thing I'd call myself good at is vore, and . . . yeah.
If you are up for requests, like you implied, well . . . I'm a lesbian, I like vore/insertion/feet (in no particular order), and I have yet to see the classic elemental trio (fire/ice/lightning) be done on this site. I'm a bit of a geek (if you couldn't tell from my references to Pokémon, Yu-Gi-Oh!, Gurren Lagann, several different Nintendo properties, and Soulcalibur). Anything that fits one or more of those specs would be utterly fantastic.
My next update to this will probably be in a week or two, given that I should be doing my next Holiday Special sometime soon.