Reviewer: Tiny-Ink-Spot Signed
Date: April 13 2022
Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
I should of done this ages ago but....omg I love your story! Been reading it since you first posted it and have to say you have outstanding skill. Everything from start to finish is just awesome. I think what you do best is making the characters believable and not 2 dimensional which adds so much.
But holy chapter 30 kept me on my toes, loved the ending you went with kinda bitter sweet for our heroine, slowly breaking down just that little bit to actually finding comfort and even liking her captors. The dream sequence was also amazing loved what you did with it. Honestly I want to write more but not sure what to say beyond amazing, I have no critique to offer cause it's all just been so good.
Keep up the good work!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Tiny-Ink-Spot!
It's always good to know people are reading. I really like GT/GTS stories, because there's inherently so much you can do with it.
Ha, I'm glad you liked chp 30, it had a lot of twists and turns, but I was glad I got to show the progression of Molly and Annabelle's/ Poppy's relationship. The dream sequence was difficult to write, but definitely the most fun. I don't get to write a lot (comparatively) of crush in this story because the antagonists didn't grow, rather the protagonist shrank, but it was fun to get the opportunity to try it out on a bigger scale (no pun intended).
Thanks for your kind words, Tiny-Ink-Spot