Hmm, see i would have to say that when i use the words "cunt" and "bitch", that i use it for both males and females, not really using it for its "intended" gender. And I am in no way a 'macho male' nor am i 'secure' in myself as it seems you believe, they're just my go-to words for when i'm upset; though i'm not angry per se, I guess i'd describe it as a slight agitation at best. And as for why i use those specific words, it's influenced by where i live, not by my outlook on women (i'm writing this bit due to the "because she's "just" a women" bit). As someone who has been around a lot of women, having also been bullied by women, i must say that regardless of someone's gender, both have the capacity and means to hurt; an example i'll give, is a woman that was shorter than me, smaller frame, though much more ferocity, managed to easily beat me to the ground and proceed to kick me (though for no other reason discernibly, than the fact i do not fight back); so forgive me if i'm sounding a tad defensive, but you seem to have interpretted a lot more from my message than was actually there, and seemed to have assumed a lot about myself from it. I'm from an Australian culture, where everyone uses "cunt" for literally everything, and "bitch" as an adjective towards anything; I don't believe for a second that women are any "lesser" than men, nor do i have the mindset that "if some bitch attacked me i could deal with it" mindset. Though i can see how there may have been things that lead you to believe this about me, and my message being as short and brash as it is, would definitely not give any reason to think of me in a positive light, i must stress that you're looking too much into what isn't there and making too many assumptions about me as a person. 

Though you are right that it is very interesting to see how we perceive the difference in impact in comparison to a giantess decimating an entire city, versus this one on one interaction. Though i honestly must say that i don't read often on this site, I cannot handle the very unreaslistic reactions and developments that are rampant in this community, mainly due to how detached i feel from it, nor do i watch much film, so i don't have a built up familiarity with these kinds of gratuitous actions and gruesome developments in terms of story or otherwise.

As for Jack being hard to project into, i'd have to disagree, i find it easy to relate with jack, maybe it's because i've been in a situation where those bigger than me have 'dominated' over me, and i reacted in a similar way. So it's incredibly easy for me at least, to project into this story and be drawn in, though of course, it's not easy to imagine this specific situation. 

But yes, that was me saying 'well done', you've definitely made an interesting story, and i think that you've done really, really well in terms of how you've written it out. 

This is a really nice story, well done

Great story man/woman, it's been really cool to read, and really nice to see a story that doesn't just have wooden characters.

I would love to see this continue, though i know how busy life can get; so at the very least i hope all is well for you. Thanks for what you've done so far.

Alright, review round two, I think this time I'll be more objective. Firstly, As with chapter 1, there is still an absence of detail, there is no description of smell, taste, touch, there is sight but it's too basic, describe the rooms/bodies to a bit more depth.

For example; the man shoving his erection into the plastic body, there could have been a better build up, maybe a description on what it's like inside of the box, the smell of plastic, the rigidity of the body, the panic or nausea that might've taken place in more descriptive detail. If it were something like "I could only see the dirt covered vinyl of the floor, the mans large hand gripped my back harshly making my body erupt in pain." it paints a slightly clearer picture in a sentence, whereas I literally cannot picture a thing in this chapter, it's too vague. 

The length is arguably toshort for what is meant to be a normal story; a short story this may be fine, but it skips into too many different places and interacts with too many people to be considered a short story. In which case, you need to give some expansion to what you're trying to write, this is in my opinion, middle school writing level; which I think makes it seem even more seeming that you're not trying. If you were to again, even just expand on the details further I think the length may just barely skim being ok for what you're trying to accomplish. 

Overall, maybe I'm being too harsh, and I would hope you take this with a pinch of salt like all internet criticisms should be; past that, hopefully the next chapter sees something promising.

Look, i'll be very frank, i dislike this story. It feels as if no effort has been put in, it isn't that creative, it doesn't really depict anything in detail, and is honestly quite dull in general. I'm sorry if this annoys you, but it really feels like you haven't tried at all.

i won't read that, i appreciate that you've tried to add to the community; but please use some punctuation. Use paragraphs, sentences with comma's, uuse something that allows this to have readability. 

Really liking it so far, well written.

I absolutely love the mom adding to his sufferings completely unaware. I would love to see Tim getting trapped in her clothes at some point, even if Julia puts him there as some sort of punishment. 

Overall it's a great story so far, very engaging for sure!