He thought he was breaking up with her gently. Now she will break him.
Id love seeing a 2nd chapter, totally loved it. Great plot!!
I still hope youll add a 2nd chapter to this. It's the best story Ive read in a while on here. Hope youll continue writing stories too.
[Incomplete]This story centers around the main protagonist, Eric Fayton. Currently beginning his second year of graduate school into physics. Upon reading an article about physics, he experiments with several theories and ends up regretting at least one of them!
Eric: He is 5'10, short hair lightly brushed to the side with full exposure of his face and forehead. Moderately athletic with mostly lean weight and only a little cushioning of fat. Fairly layed back overall, his strict regiment of schooling is coupled with a strict diet and light workout regiment. He offsets this stress with his weekly pot and meditation routines, as well as yearly dabbling of mind-expanding drugs. He is stricken with a confidence and inquisitive nature that were somewhat dangerous together. Whether out of unintentional narcissism or optimism, he often brazenly rushes into situations without properly analyzing their implications on reality or negative consequences.
hope you continue, the plot looked really interesting, nice details and story telling.
A man is shrunk by his roommates, reduced to a toy for their amusement.
Very interesting plot so far!! Looking forward for how it goes on, the size is a bit too big for my likings. Too bad it's not unaware plot I love them even more. Keep up the goog work!!
Im giving this 10 points because there are way too little unaware stories out there especially with micro and nano shrinking sizes and butt plots. I also read your other story Giantess World and really liked it. I have one thing to critisim though: You seem to rush really badly on the good parts and have some kind of diary writing style like for example here: "My whole body was swallowed and her ass cheeks wrapped back around me containing me. She then opened the stall door and I felt her walking again. Since she had just pooped, it smelled even worse then before. Her leftover feces had dried onto my body. I even had accidentally swallowed some. I puked again." it sounds really compressed like in a diary, like "I went to my room. I sat down. I started to read a book. I had finished reading.", see what I mean? I totally would have loved if you had written things like him trying to get away but just laying there listening to the horrible noises going, like the silence, then a sudden splash of a dump of her hitting the water, how this all would reflect in his mind, literally rendering him paralized. Then how she would have wiped, maybe just used a single toilet paper meaning not giving a proper wipe at all. And then the most important parts you totally left out or just mentioned in a few words, how she would send her panties up again, and what would awaits him while the flushing of the toilet would be in the background, how he would notice her anus not being properly wiped, and then how he would get some shit in his face by a total sudden move of her, and how he would gag and accidentally swallow a bit, how he would vomit, and so on. You totally should try to improve it towards a more detailed and less "narrative" writing style. I would love seeing some darker toilet humor stuff again if possible, I love ass insertion so much, especially if its unaware. Keep up the great work, this story is totally on my radar because of the lack of good ass plots.
This was amazing! This is perfect length of a chapter!! really well done. I like longer chapter a lot more. you also did well with the details this time. Maybe you could even add some more humiliation from the mother like her being in a bored mood, having a phone call with a friend and talking about her "shitty son" and her son sobbing listeing to it where in fact he was a shitty son, literally. and at that moment her releasing a foul fart into his sobbing face. I would love her taking a dump again in the morning with her son this time stayin inside her ass, and a turd slowly sliding over him, and glueing him to the walls, him screaming, and then the shit slowly ramming inside his face, mouth, down his throat, and him vomitting down into the toilet. totally white/greenish face, nearly passing out from the experience. and his mother just carelessly releasing a fart as an answer of his sobbings. I also thought what if he shrunk again and totally would become an ass parasite, as the lowest possible thing imaginable. Then in another chapter he could get inserted inside her rectum and maybe even shrink again, and totally becoming a nano ass parasite, where another bowl movement would collect him again inside a turd. This is the best story Ive read in month, keep it up man. Good ass plots are never to be found anymore.
I really liked the ideas you came up with but you also drifted away a bit into that diary style. You should really try to go away from that. I loved the last part of her not wiping and told him to jump in, but then it was a bit unsatisfying how he just did that so easily. And this best part was also not written out like it could be. But still keep it up, I really like the story after all.
Two teenage best friends finally get to live out the fantasy of sledding down a mountain of ice cream; however, things don't go quite as planned.
this is amazing!!! I would given 100 out of 10 haha loved it, fantastic ending. I love unaware more than anything.
Thanks! Unaware stories are my favorite too! ^o ^
Two teens enjoy their yearly back yard campout until waking up tiny the morning after.
ONE OF the best stores I hav ever read. it's weird how your profile says Just another m/m macro writer, because there are no real good m/m macro authors I know of. please stay m/m!!! they are so rare and just the best!!! I would love seeing a true unaware transformation story maybe a cotton underpants. in the intro I totally thought the green tent had become a tiny bubblegum or candy lol food tf is so hot too. I loved the microspooic size in this story so much, speck shrinking sizes are my favorites too. you have such amazing talend with words, I love the talking style so much of the boys. that cell phone idea was so cool. I wonder what a swallowed person may try to call his brother or friend that would be cool too.
A pleasent night with your dog goes awry.
Really enjoyed this. Reminds me a bit of the story A little Chew Toy by Kickyou. I like humiliation by animals, for example in the little chew toy story I loved how the dog used the toy as a masturbation toy and gave it "anal" ;) I like the idea when it's a transformation plot, that the object is used for some really humiliating things by animals, or the owner of the pet uses the object in some humiliating way, like a fiver suppository or deworming suppository for a horse or dog, or someone ends as a pebble of dog or bird food.
A very stinky punishment for a deserving step-son.
Holy shit again :p The part of wher he swallowed part of her shit smearing inside his mouth and he "tasted" her chili from the day before he ate from too, best humor ever. Would had loved seeing him gag and vomit more maybe after he woked up and his senses suddenly kicked in like wh- where am I *gag* I- or when he swallowed her digested chili remains lol. A funny adding could have been also a undigested kernel inside her shit larger than himself. Please continue this is so hot.
Holy shit, literally :p Please write on, best scat ass plot in a while. Good details, proper grammar, good telling style. All really nice.
A student must spend his summer imprisoned and shrunken as punishment for his failing grades while trying to suppress his burgeoning foot fetish around his unsuspecting family.
I love unaware more than anything!! Will this plot have ass insertion too? Really nice story, keep on writing.
I do have a few ideas for an unaware ass insertion scenario. I was unsure if I should go ahead with it because I know that kind of thing is not a lot of people's cup of tea, but it does seem people are cool with it so maybe I'll go ahead and throw it in anyway. I'm writing this story to my tastes and unaware ass stuff is my absolute favorite next to feet, but I was also afraid of ruffling people's feathers lol
You have such a good talent with humiliation I love the story. Amazin work for it's your first story man!! Unaware ass stuff is my absolute favorite, that would be the best shit, literally, ever to see it happen in the story too. Or maybe you keep it for your next story and totally make out a pure ass plot with it, with also character death at the end inside an ass. I also enjoy toilet and scat a lot, I know some other people on here do too so I dont think it will ruffling the feathers :]
A new widespread scandal has broken in the world of athletics as twenty female athletes have posted positive results for performance enhancind drugs. What are these drugs? The answer may surprise you.
I am really curious where this is leading, if it is leading anyway I hope so, because the tags sound promising. Hope you will continue.
It is really more of a one-off story, however if a strike of ideas hit me I may pick it back up.
When Mike's plan for the weekend with his friend get canceled, he figured he would just have to spend the weekend at home with his mom and three sisters. He wasn't entirely wrong about that...
hope youll write again I liked your two stories a lot. would love to see some vore ending maybe or anal vore plots too.
Thanks thanks!!
VORE, huh? WELL well well you might like next chapter...whenever it shows up?
Some sorority girls end up in a really unfortunate situation.
Why didn't I find this earlier!? Hot!
He must have really upset her at that party last night. Or she's just a merciless bitch. Either way, he never thought his relationship would end with such a mess.
What a find, amazing story. Hope to see more. Your name reminds me of a plot, I always wished to read some really ironic story where some unfortunate guys end inside the back area of a girls underpants in her skidmark, shrinking so tiny the human eye cant see them anymore and they basically become lost inside it, until it's thrown in the washing mashine.
Thank you! I am planning on working on more soon. I have a few inspirations that I'd like to implement into writing. I like that idea of yours, too!
Six friends break into the home of a shrewd businesswoman while she is at work, hoping to net themselves quite a haul. However, they find themselves shrunken while inside; even worse, the lady of the house returns very soon after...
One of the best stories so far of 2016. Amazing length, great plot, good grammer and great writing style. I love unfortunate plots more than anything. A downer for me was the 1cm of height of the shrunken characters, which is a bit too high for my taste, I like ant sizes way more. Hope you will conitnue! Would love a plot like this again but with smaller shrinking sizes, unaware, and maybe vore too.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this story. :)
I did think about making them smaller, like around 1mm, but I felt that that would have made interaction with Ms. Fields very difficult. I do agree that sizes that small have a sort of appeal.
In a world where a small percentage of the population falls victim to a shrinking disorder, one teenager gives in to her darker desires.
And then convinces her friend to do so as well.
Wait... what!? Do miracles still happen on this site!? This was... is... by FAR THE BEST story Ive read, in, like two years maybe on here. 20 out of 10 points... 30... Everything is perfect with this story. The shrinking size (ant size), the unaware combined with half aware and half unaware, I fell in love with the idea of Nicky manipulated her best friend in believing her siblings wanted to get swallowed... wanted to become her shit. That whole conversation, the toilet part, absolute amazing. I hope so much you will write a story like this again, I saw it was a commission, though not sure if it's what you enjoy writing yourself, but dude, this was just outstanding. I love sarcastic plots more than anything. Just curious, how much do you charge for a story like this?
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I dedicated a good chunk of time to it. A large amount of the story's content happens to align with my own interests, so it wasn't too difficult for me to find inspiration.
As far as the cost, my current rate is $4 a page. Before formatting and conversion to HTML, the story was 25 pages, or $100. Of course, that's a good bit longer than most of my commissions tend to be. 5-15 pages is much more common.
I realize that's still more than most are willing to pay for a story, as compared to a drawing, or comic, but if you are interested feel free to message me on DA and we can discuss details. My profile is http://zyphsqueak.deviantart.com