Dont want to be rude, but whats the meaning of this story? There is like nothing happening in this story. I had high expectations for a story like this and was disappointed like never before.

No I meant like, the plot doesn't seem to go anywhere. Where are the parts of all the tags? I didn't see any of them yet. Where are the unaware, butt, vore parts?

What the... DUDE :O This is like the best TF story I ever read. WOW! What a cameback... You rock dude... I always loved your TF stories the most, but this is like your best so far. What a fantastic idea. I love panties TF, the idea with the letter and then the guys best friend cheating on him and his gf. The best was but the idea of Chuck giving her anal, by just spreading her panties a bit by side and leaving it on her, FANTASTIC IDEA!! I came so hard on that part, and the following, the highlight of the story, of where in the worst moment, he flipped back and... oops. Best idea ever. And them be like "shit, think you need to wash those". That was the best, ultimate humiliation I ever read as an idea.

Know what would have been a cool idea too? I got it when the word rip happened. I thought of, what if a round shape around Chucks dick head would have been riped off the panties, unfortunatly the "face" of his friend, and now sent deep as a small shred of fabirc into the intestines of his gf, mixed with shit and cum of his best friend. And them noticng then "shit" I think you need to throw them away, seeing the hole in the back area. Then Adam's mind/his face would be shat out later by his gf, embedded into a turd of hers and cum of his best friend.

For the ending, a cool twisted idea also could have been, her being like "shit, no toilet paper left" and then looking on the worn out panties, and using Adam as toilet paper, trowing it then abused and smeared with shit into the toilet, then her still peeing on him.

Fantasic story, I think your best so far. You rock man, and your ideas. Hope lots more like this will follow. Your ass plots are the best. And the very dark and ironic ones. 20 out of 10 points :] 

This is one of the best unaware vore stories Ive read in a while on here. Damn well done. I love the ironic twists in here so much. Would love to see more stories from you in this style. Would had been even better if he was a bit smaller, 1" is a bit too large already for unaware vore.

hope youll continue, looking great so far

did you flip the chapters? it was a bit confusing. but I liked the new chapter!!

really interesting plot so far. I like more cruel plots. keep it going! maybe putting them in her brothers cereals, or glueng them on a toilet paper, or feeding them to a bird.

hope you're not gone, this still is my favorite story of 2016. truly hope youll come back and continue on the wrath of sammy, and hopefully use some of the ideas I mentioned in the comments, I mostly come on here every day to check if you're posted something again. please don't be gone, you are truly my favorite author on here, there is no one else writing that epic transformation plots with unfortunate endings.

I just had to think of your story when I saw this part of the anime Yuri!!! on ice: http://wakata.tumblr.com/post/152960070448
I imagine the boy right being like your character and poor Brandon be that stuffed doggy toy, and the boy using it later on as a flesh-light in its butt.

I didn't want to give you a bad rating, because of how much I loved the two first chapters, but honestly, chapter 3 was a huge disappointment for me. Why did you switch over to f/m where it was a m/m story? You somehow destroyed the amazing plot for me with this chapter. Also because of how this seemed like a "happy end", and how Brandon even enjoyed himself, which doesn't make much sense in my opinion.

But thats just a personal preference, and I want to be objective in my review. The length is amazing, like the chapter before, and you are a master of ironic twists. I loved the first half or thrift of the chapter. The best part was with Brandons best buddy "turn" for him and befriend this "wimp faggot". I liked how you put the "it can't get worse" a few times. Unfortunatly the ending was a happy endings, so it didn't fit actually.

I loved how you created the Jamie character though. How he was this friendly gay boy, how he had this room looking with cute girly stuff, how he wear those cat ears and earrings and everything, and how he wear skinny skin tight jeans. How he was friendly to everyone, even to Brandons friend, and everything, I just loved that.
The whole plot idea is still a 10 out of 10 in my opinion, even I didn't like the ending, and was hoping for something else, it would be unfair to down vote it because of that.

I was actually hoping for a m/m ending, would be hilerious actually if we find out Charlie was gay too and they would fuck, and then Brandon tf's again ending as Charlies inner ass (his mouth his anus).

Honestly, I am really upset now, that this story is marked as complete. Because I am just so in love with the character Jamie.

I saw what you put in the last line, and I just have to beg you, please moe m/m tf stories like this one, please in a high school (age 16-18), with some twink boy again as the unaware guy. I would just love to see a more unfortunate plot though of some guy actually ending as some twinks ass, and him literally have the "honor" of experience what it would be like to vomit up a bowl movement aka taking a dump. And then the guy just casually wiping, mostly sitting in school or before going to school, and then the poor guy just a shell of his former self, with a "shocked" expression on his "face", like he was literally raped, no, worse, and him vomitting in his mind of what just happened, or even not being able to think anymore, just "looking into an abyss", and *FLUSH* *ZIP*, the boy rushing out, thaaanks moom, bye, and the guy in his ass just screaming in his mind.

Another thing, just a personal favor though, please no giant plots. This story is so good, even I didn't like the ending, I think it's best of 2016 if I could vote, and it truly found a part in my all time favorite list of stories. I also think it's your best story so far you wrote.

So, yes, I wishing to see more high school m/m tf stories like this one. Especially the idea of some himophobic alpha males being just humiliated ending "in hellish" situations is just awesome, and totally now my favorite.

Even if marked as complete, maybe there is still a chance of a sequel and it's not the end yet of Brandon.

Please write more stories like this one!!! :-) Your just have to.