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Cheater, Cheater? by EDai Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

The story of what happens when a woman's shrunken wife demands that she get a girlfriend.


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Futanari, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, New World Order, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40130 Read Count: 109694
[Report This] Published: July 28 2017 Updated: August 04 2017
Reviewer: TinyPrinny Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Of Judging and Jurors

I think you write wonderfully. You have a fantastic style and you seemed to know where the story was going and I have to applaud you. This was a very good story. I will admit though that I hated Gwen and all of me wanted Erin to tell her to fuck off, but this is your story not mine. The fact that you could draw out an emotion like that out of me just goes to prove the quality of the writing. Great job! Looking forward to reading the epilogue. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

I kind of want to hate Gwen, too. Maybe that's the point?

I've always been one of those, 'True love,' people, so I hate to have written a story where someone tries to break up a couple of high school sweethearts, but it is what it is!

As for keeping it up, the epilogue is already the second longest chapter I've written, and will end up being far and away the longest chapter of the series. It might be up by Monday, as I hadn't intended it to be so long.

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