Adam wakes up finding himself in far more danger than he expected...
That was wonderfully descriptive and I liked the transitions between dream and reality, and occasionally shifting focus to Cassy's point of view. I really do like the stories that take on the giantess's POV, instead of always just being from the "victim's" perspective.
I continue to love the detail you put in. It's so easy to picture what's happening with the level of descriptive detail you use. I look forward to even more.
Steve, a shy and somewhat sheltered high school graduate has a small fairy take an interest in his overactive sexual imagination. She's become enamored with him and his fantasies and wants to help him live them out.
Really like it. Can't wait for more adventures.
Glad you like it, and I appreciate the high review.
Thanks!
After several years of study Brian has finally earned the degree he needed to help crew a starship. To make things even better he's already been in contact with a ship captain and even found a job as an exploration officer. There is one problem however. The Captain of this ship is not only considered a high threat species but a deep space species as well. The potential danger posed by this being is so great she isn't even welcome on the surface of a developed world.
This means little to him as he goes to meet Shia who has become a good friend to him over long distance communications. He soon learns that Shia is a shapeshifter and telepath. These reveleations are only the beginning however as he learns that Shia also has an addiction that drives her and those of her species to seek out new cultures while her abilty to change her body far exceeds anything he had imagined.
You really have a very fine talent for world building. Interesting characters, interesting settings, wonderfully unique concepts.
Thanks. I don't know if I can claim credit for the concept I was inspired by a lot japanese role playing games. Part of it was just imaging what if the big world eating villain was a very benevolent lady.
ALL NEW CHAPTER 35!
A love story about two NYC Detectives are get paired up and just don't get along. Things change however when, what they think is a curse, ends up being a gift. This is a long story that has a few plots.
Wow... Donna's a pretty terrible friend and person.
Hmmm....thats one way to look at it. You will see thats not the case a little later on.
This latest chapter really needs some formatting. You've got all the dialogue scrunched up together and it makes it hard to tell who's saying what.
Wow. That didn't post like that when I did it. All my line breaks are gone. I'll fix that....
Peter Craft wakes up in the room of his best friend only to find he's now two inches tall. See through his eyes as Peter lives out some of his deepest fantasies, while also learning the reality behind being a shrunken man living with an actual giantess.
Be careful about building up this secret too much. Overhype it and it might end up disappointing when finally revealed.
A newly shrunken Amelia must endure the whims of her peers
I'll admit that I find the pet shop sex dungeon stuff to be dragging on a bit.
I keep hoping Delilah will come and save the day. With all her concern for Amelia I would like to think she'd follow up on her status. Also maybe get suspicious at how her girlfriend afforded that new mini.
Andrew has a secret. And it isn't a secret he can tell. Because four years ago, he was cursed, sentenced by a young witch to live in fear and hatred. And the only way to break the curse is for someone to love him for who he is. But once five years is up, the curse becomes permanent. Can someone see the beauty in Andrew's cursed self, before his time expires? Can someone see beneath his exterior?
I agree with others here. I can't see chapters 10 or 16 on the list. Can't access them, and I don't really want to continue reading until I can.
Love it so far though.
You posted this all at once, is there somewhere else you have this posted that I can read it with the missing chapters included?
A young lady paladin sets out on a quest to deal with an evil witch, and finds more than she bargains for in the process.
The original Marcella story; credit for the character Ranavalona belongs wholly to Kaneda.
This was a fun story and it ended exactly as I hoped it would.
Sam, a 17 year old cocky student, finds himself shrunk down in school one day through a bizzare turn of events. He soon finds himself at the mercy of his friends and schoolmates, and has to make difficult decisions for his every crucial move as old friendships rekindle and new adversities unfold.
Is this where the predictable cliche of getting kidnapped by the girl that doesn't like you comes up?
Since you are no fortune teller and I'm not gonna spoil anything, I won't answer your question.
But if you think that is the case (which apparantly you do) then I suggest you stop wasting your time on reading cliches :)
Guess his creepy pervo behavior at the beginning has caught up with him to bite him in the ass. Though I believe Julia is understanding enough that if they sat down and had a heart to heart that they'd be able to work things out.
I agree, Julia actually sounds pretty mature, she just doesn't trust him.
Thank you for the review and the comment!
A young girl comes into posession of a jewelry case, entirely unremarkable sparing it's fascinating contents.
Been writing this one up for a while, so it will be the first story I will post in chapter format, seeing as it is yet to be finished. Also the first micro (as opposed to macro) story I've written, so do point out any incongruities or improvements I could make.
Would love to have comments, reviews, and critique. Thanks.
I like the almost consequence free nature of this whole thing. Sure she's tormenting and killing tiny people, but they're basically just tiny little clones of the real people. So she's not actually killing them for real.
I think a rather humorous action she could take in the coming chapters would be to let one of the mini people get offed unknowingly by their larger selves.
I like this story, though I have to say that image of what she did in the latest chapter (vag shark) is rather humorous to picture.
Based on the life of three space travelers that were pulled into another planets atmosphere and thrust into this strange new world. Upon realizing that himself, and his other crew members can't ever get back home. They're forced to overcome some of the worst, and best happenings that could ever be imagined... However, this planet is very much like their own, only one thing is actually different....
Wasn't she supposed to return Jim the night before?
Well, Julianna doesn't really listen to anyone else. She does her own 'thang'!!!
;`) Thanks JimBob !
For the sake of this story, do not make Marie out to be just like all the others. I'm still disappointed that Ann ended up being so cruel.
That last bit seems out of character for Marie. Is she that afraid of telling Sam about who Jim is being held by?
Marie is afraid of what her 'self-centered', egotistical, older sister, might do to little Jimmy, and if she doesn't tell Sam that Jim is with her, and something does happens to him, then she wouldn't have the burden of telling him about it...after the fact.
She is just hoping that nothing happens to Jimmy, and Julianna brings him back to her in one piece. Then she will have both of them together with her... that's what she really wants, is to have both of them, two miniature men, all to herself... ;`)
Johan attends a party hosted by his eccentric brother, Greg. He has no interest in seeing his brother, whom he despises, but goes to see his 13 year old niece Emi, but things take a turn for the crazy. Everybody in the house is shrunken down to near microscopic size and the only one left at normal size is Emi, who is completely unaware that her simple actions such as walking, sitting and eating is exterminating the lives of many defenceless party guest. Can anyone survive the unaware Emi and potentially a late party guest that Johan and Greg know all too well and how will Johan handle his evil brother Greg who is the root of all of these problems?
I just don't see how there's going to be any way out of this for any of them. They're just too small to be even perceived as people.
I agree with you there, they are pretty much screwed and thanks a ton for the comment.
