Wow, another great chapter! You seem in a writing mood atm, keep going :p I can't wait for the next updates on the other chapters. I like the 99,x% ones more because of the unaware factor :p

really hope you will come back. still the best story on here.

One of the best stories/ending chapters I have ever read. Why didnt I find out about this jewel earlier :'/ <3

As much as I love your story, I have one question though, why do you never going through with what this story is all about? I mean, it's fine having some kind of thrill for a few times, but dont you think it's becoming a little bit, let me say, weird, if it happens over and over and over again? Please dont take me wrong, I love your story, so this is not meant in a negative way. I totally loved the suppositories idea, I wished to much she wouldnt have notices. I know this mostly will not happen anymore, but if you someday would write another story, or even more than one chapter, I would love to this this suppositories idea again. I have to say this was one of my all time favorite ideas ever, I had reading something similiar in some other stories before, and I always liked the idea. Keep up the great work!

Totally loved the last chapter. I hope you will stay it by the vore ending. I loved the idea of one unaware, the other aware about Jack's fate. And How his aunt would feed him to his mother, who wouldn't even know about it. Maybe you could write out the ironic/sarcastic event even more, including digestion, how the two woman would talk and at the same time Jake would book a one way trip through mom's bowls. Make include some more jokes by his aunt to his mother, who wouldn't know the irony of it. I also liked how his aunt got wet while watching him being devoured unknowingly.

One of the best stories Ive read so far on here for a long time. Awesome unique story idea too. Please continue, Im so curious right now how it will go on. I have to say Im a big fan of unaware shrinking ant shrinking sizes of ant/flea size, so this story definitely is great so far. The concept is brilliant, of him somehow wanting to be small again, dont thinking about what could happen if he stays unaware and no one would know he shrunk. I hope you will add to this unaware factor towards the end of the story, maybe including some ending of unfortunate events? Dont know what you had in mind for the upcoming chapter(s) though. But please continue this (: Max rating.

awesome to see some great unaware anal/humiliation/vore story again, they are so rare to find. hope to see an update again soon. keep up the great work.

Finally an update to my favorite story right now in here!! I thought you had abandoned it, so yay :) The chapter was the best so far. I just loved this part:

Rachel let out a bitter laugh, “You should have paid more attention in science.  There’s only 2 ways out.  The first is from where you just came from.  The second would be below you.”

“You mean out her… butt? Ewwwww.”

“God your dense!” Rachel shouted in anger as her voice grew closer and closer.  “We’re going to be digested and then crapped out of her ass!”

Just the way of irony and sarcasm I love the most in stories, really great. Im really curious on what you had in mind for the upcoming next. And I hope you will continue on the story soon :) Keup up the fantastic unaware shrinking stories.

Sorry for the comment after a comment, but I just had to do this after reading it. It's for "I wonder if Sammy is going to eventually tell Caitlyn what she's done so she can relish in her enemies' pain and suffering... I hope so." and I just wanted to say: There are like 99.8% aware "giantess" stories, like 20% of them are micro (about ant size shrinking), and Idk, lets say, maybe again 10% of these 0.2% unaware stories are about one os aware and the other not. Why do the fans of the ~99% aware shrinking stories ALWAYS have to comment on the 0.2% unaware stories things like "I hope they still become aware at some point^^". Can't those people stay away from the are unaware fandome and leave them to the (already unhappy) unaware fans dammit? I hope the auhtor will NOT let Caityln become aware of what Sammy did for her, it makes everything so much better. Thats the whole point of unaware, letting the suffering of the shrunken charcters being even more pointless, especially here, where they have deserved it for mocking and bullying Caitlyn for so long. Letting it be Caityln herself who will let her bullys suffer and not be aware about it, is just the best idea possible. Letting them vanish from the surface of the earth and never have any sorrows again of being bullied is just great. I loved the idea of what does Sammy for her friend. I was bullied too over some point in my life at high school, and I always wished they could get just vanish away, but yeah. I really look forward into this story now, I just loved the introduction. The reader could really get into the whole point of the story, even if there never was used the word shrinking or hint to it at all yet. I hope the story will be a combination of every other great story of yours yet, like Twin trouble and Let the Games Begin/The Games are never over. At some point if the two girls are alone now, it would be be great seeing some fun for her surprise birthday party like some anal dildo play, but I didnt know if you had this planned for this story. Also I hope there maybe will be some full trip too containing digestion and after math on the toilett a day later. Keep writing, and stay unaware (=

hey :) that was one of the best stories I've read here in a while. and welcome aha. really, thank you so much for sharing this story. i have to say im mostly into unaware, which is so damn rare to find under good authors. and pleas believe me, i just loved your story. the writing style was great, it had an awesome plot, lots of irony/sarcasm which i so damn love to read in a shrinking/tf story combined with bad luck, which also is a favorite topic of mine. th e best thing though was, you combined my all time favorite plot ideas unaware transformation and vore. i always loved unaware panties tf, and also loved the idea of tf into a tiny bug or ant and get vored. so this story just came out of nowhere like a miracle to me. even if it's "just" a short story, it for sure is already under my top10 stories on here, just because it was nearly perfect for me in the topic and plot. im very picky of what i like. 10 out of 10 stars (; also it would be really interesting, just if you want of course, if you could come back at me via mail or im. i would be curious about a lot of things, did you publish other stories before somewhere else? do you take story requests or commissions? that would be just awesome actually. my mail is "miaraluc at yahoo dot com" would be cool to hear from you. it's really annoying you cant write private messages on this site to authors, so, yeah :) again, amazing story. and i hope you will continue to write.