Membership status: Member
Bio:
Categories: New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2791 Read Count: 7023
Date: February 25 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I know this isn't a review really, but you seemed to be asking for feedback in general. I definitely liked the story, and would like to see more if you are thinking of conitnuing it.
Author's Response: I appreciate the feedback! I'm definitely looking to write more, I know this story is a bit choppy at spots so I'm looking to build off it.
This is my first true vore story, and it’s also my first story with a female protagonist. There’s a male pred, a female pred, some male prey, some female prey. All the vore is fatal, and almost all the vore is soft.
Dedicated to everyone who helps someone else try something new.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Couples, Giant, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19453 Read Count: 34986
Date: October 12 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great so far! I love couples vore and first time vore (especially when one person persuades the other, unlocking hidden desires), so this is right up my alley.
Can't wait to see more.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it! Yeah, "awakening" stories are richer when couched in terms of a relationship. No one is the same afterward.