Reviewer: Deuce Micro Signed
Date: June 28 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Roger's new life
It's good to see you back in action again, I'm Deuce Micro, also known as Ace Corona, and back in 2000-2002 I was known as Riverdog13 and Deuce Little O, do you remember me?
I like how you got right to the good part, showing how he lives at tiny size, and the descriptions of Kelsie's personality sounds like a real teenage girl.
Author's Response: Ace! Of course I remember you. You and i often have similar tastes. I hope I have the enrgry to keep thios story going for awhile becaue I often run out of steam. The typing part is my biggest hatle and I write it out during the day and then often struggle making sense of my scribbles at night! Here's hoping I complete this one for a change. I Really like the character of Kelsie and I agree, I am trying to make her a real teenage girl though she will be more mature than alot of girls her age as we shall soon see. I have finished chapter 10 and I just have to get a chance to type it. I really like it and I hope you do too. Teaser: It goes to when Kelsie first brings roger to his new home and how that goes. First I need to finish the first day the strain hits Roger and then I will add the chapter 10 then I am so eager to share.
I think you will like the way I am planning to go a little out of sequenence with my storytelling. It allows us to see Roger at different phases of his experience.
Please keep commenting any time Deuce, I am totally into feedback, especially of people whose opinions I respect,
