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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 11:54 PM Title: The Black Box

Wonderful story - full of intense decriptions from both perspectives.

Well done!

Looking foward to futue chapters...

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 6:42 AM Title: The Black Box

Great chapter. Love the detail. Wonder how "I'll" survive. Cannot wait for the next chapter.

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