Reviews For The Voodoo Doll
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: January 20 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story. I wish it went on a little longer and that Sarah toyed with Jack a little more.
Dave
Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: January 20 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Cool one-shot... I'd like to see this continued! Very nice! ;`)
Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: January 19 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was a fresh twist on the genre. The events had a nice logical flow that made me want to see what came next, and the grammar/construction was all neat and tidy. If anything, I'd have been interested to see the story go on a little longer with Sarah experimenting with the doll before she did what she did, but the dark tone of that ending worked well given how short the story is. Overall, a very solid piece here; well done.