




Date: January 23 2014 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Real Prison
Resolve...I wonder how long that will last. Cannot wait for the next installment, I want to see Maggie take Scott to practice. I also hope scot does something to really piss off Judy and Maggie both so that there real sides come out. As for grammar and such I found nothing. You have smoothe writing and excllent ideas as usual. I love reading your stories. I hope you keep writing for a long time.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing/reading! I know I frequently tease the idea of Maggie wearing Scott to soccer practice, and I do intend to pay off that implication someday. You can probably expect to see Maggie and Judy being a little truer to themselves in future installments now that Scott is legally theirs to abuse. I'll keep on going with these stories as long as people enjoy them.