[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
Thought you abandoned this glad to see it back. One of my favorite stories on the site
Author's Response:
Nope, deffinetly not abandoned! I hope the next chapter will not take as long to get out. :)
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
really amazing story, I would love seeing if this is finished a story with the micro/nano guy not being invincible and would be digested. you gave incredible talent in writing out details and I love the conversations between the girls between the plot, also awesome mix in between with sarcasm humiliation and irony.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the high rating and praise, glad you're enjoying the story so far! I'm not sure if there will ever be a fatal end to the story, but perhaps an alternate ending someday. :)
[Report This]Date: March 11 2015 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
Great story! You've written it really well! The AV parts are my favorite
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hope you enjoy the new chapter ^_^
[Report This]Date: August 22 2014 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
This is... wow, it's great. You're definitely one of the best shrink authors I've read in a while - and I've been reading this stuff for, what, five years at least? I can't wait for the next post, and I'm glad to hear you're making it a non-fatal 'full tour'. I haven't read a good one of those in FOREVER. I have to agree, so many other foolish authors just type out tiny little descriptions of the parts that really matter.
You mentioned you wrote more stories elsewhere - you should put a link to them in your bio on here, I for one would love to read them. I just hope I can polish up my skills so I can become as good as you. ;)
Author's Response: Ha! I wouldn't say I'm that good, but I'm glad you've enjoyed what I've wrote so far. Next post should be coming up shorty, providing life give me time to actually write it :P As far as any others that I've wrote, the only other vore/giantess related on is already posted up here; For the most part everything else I've wrote is just normal creative writing or RP-ing Hope you continue to read! :)
Date: August 21 2014 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
Very well written! You are very vivid in almost every scene and it is a pleasure to read your story! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it and I hope you like what's to come! :)
[Report This]Date: August 13 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
I've been a lurker here for a while, and your story is one of the most vivid and exciting that I've come across in a long while. I like that it is an adventurous story, but not voilent. And a lot of the situations you've illustrated are very well excecuted. In the next chapter, I look forward to your handling of Adam's current situation.
Author's Response: Thanks for the high praise and review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far, and like they styling. Stay tuned, a new chapter will be coming soon :)
Date: July 24 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
Was really enjoying this, hope you do more chapters
Author's Response: There will be soon, stay tuned :)
[Report This]Date: June 08 2014 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
That was wonderfully descriptive and I liked the transitions between dream and reality, and occasionally shifting focus to Cassy's point of view. I really do like the stories that take on the giantess's POV, instead of always just being from the "victim's" perspective.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy the detail, that's usually one of the things that bugs me the most about a lot of writing in this particular fetish. Not so much on here, but else where you'll get a two sence description for something that should be a paragraph or more. Hopefully I'll be able to do something similar in the later chapters :)
Date: May 25 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
nice story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
Another new author and another amazing story! This could be a very good story, Keep up the hard work. Hopefully the next chapter is just as good, or better!
Author's Response:
I also hope the response to the next chapter is as good. :)
And as I've said, this isn't my first story involving shrinking themes, but it is my first story posted on here.
Thank you for your high review! :)
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
You should definitely continue! This was one of the most elaborately described unaware stories I've read in a long time!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really appreciate it actually, especially coming from an author whose stories I've admired and eagerly awaited new chapters to! :)
I'm hoping everyone likes the next chapter as much, if not more than this one. :D
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
Awesome!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
A lot of great potential, and so far so good! You do well at describing the unaware aspects, I'd just slightly slow down the pace to give more detailed descriptions of the giantess and her actions. Can't wait to follow this story!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it so far. I'm a fan of unaware, so I guess it comes a little easy. :)
I am slowing the pacing down in the decond chapter and trying to add more details in; I'm slating it to be 7000 words up from the ~4000 words of this chapter. Although I'm already 1500 words in and not even finished with the first scene ;)
I do really appreciate the glowing review and fir critiqueing, I'm glad everyone likes my work so far :)
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
Excellent few spelling errors but not much. Keep it going slow and steady plenty of details and it be spot on.6
Author's Response:
I thought I caught most of them, but editing was never my strongest suite ;)
I'm planning on making the pacing a little slower, adding more details in in the second chapter, and slating for approximately 7000 words up from the ~4000 in this chapter.
Hope you like the next chapter too :)
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
This is really good for a first time.
However, it is a little rushed, I feel you went into the action too early when perhaps you could have built up the scene a little more.
Despite of that it's a good read and enjoyable. I like the imagery you've used and the interactions between Cassy and Adam are spot on.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
It's my first time posting any of my work on here, it's not my first story involving shrinking however.
I did have a couple different ideas on the scene, but ended up going with this. However I'm writing the second chapter I'm writing a bit slower, and with more detail and unaware interactions :)
I'm slating it to be about 7000 words, up from the ~4000 of this chapter, so hopefully that should slow it down and give plenty of time for detail ;)
I also appreciate a true critique on the content and pace, Thanks!
Date: May 23 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
VERY GOOD! I Like the way it takes and how tiny he is, he seems to be way less than half an inch.Just continue I'm so impatient to see that Brandy bitch in action!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the positive review :)
Yes, he is quite tiny; Initially I was trying really hard to set a size and maintain it, but for whatever reason when I'm writing it always fluctuates. I actually make a subtle mention of it in the second chapter :)
And I'm actually not quite sure who I'm going to be introducing next to the story, I have a rough outline of what I'm going to do, but I haven't decided on Brany or Jess yet. :P
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: You know you're in trouble when...
For a first story this is well written ,and I am enjoying it so far. I'm a big fan of anal insertion so the set up is a tease and I'm hooked. I look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
It really isn't my first story, but the first one I've posted on here.
However I'm glad you liked it, and yes, I would suggest you look out for the second chapter ;) Work on it is progressing a little slowy, but there's a lot planned for it and 2 pages are written already ^_^