[Report This]Date: August 07 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!
Liking the story so far, you're doing a great job! :)
Would definetly cast my vote for her butt, but that's just my preference :P
Keep at it, you're doing great so far :D
[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!
Make him tap three times for her ass crack.
I am loving this story alot and i hope you finish this.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am not entirely sure if this story will ever truly end. I have so many thoughts and ideas I want to explore. It is possible this specific story may conclude but there will be sequels as long as I can write, you guys will have me and I can fantasize.
So far the butt is winning.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!
Wow, I just all six chapters and you amazed me.
Jessica and Brad kept in character and didnt have any surprising behaviour. I like how I can easily understand the motives for each person which makes this story that much easier to read.
I also love the tone you gave Jessica. Especially when she says "he is staying small forever" or "we are going to have some fun". I dont know, I guess I like it when a sexy woman says stuff like that to a tiny man's horror.
I like the continous action. Panties, bra, mouthplay, feet, ass, and now where to carry him.
My vote is for the front of the panties. Second choice is back of panties, 3rd is bra, and fourth is feet.
Now the reason why I want the front of the panties is becuase I love insertion and when a giantesss gains pleasure. Of course, she gains pleasure from all those places, but I believe she gains pleasure most from the front of the panties.
I see alot of people love ass, including me. I was thinking, maybe Jessica will put Brad in the front of her panties, then he slides to the back of the panties later on. Then he slides back to the front of the panties near the end of the trip.
I love the diversity of all the things that Brad is going through, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you Tom, Jessica is the type of giantess I would choose for my self if the chance ever arose. When I started writing this story it was on a whim, I have read many and looked at pictures for years but I decided to toss my hat into this community officially.
I have never wrote a story before but have paragraph rped for years so decided I would take a writing style I am used too and put it to paper. That's why there is so much back and forth flow it is similar to reading two people paragraph rp, im glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!
I like how the story's progressing. This chapter had a nice variety of different body parts, a little something for everyone. I vote for him to spend some time in the back of her panties. maybe he means to tap four times, but she only feels three?
Author's Response:
Thank you Mr E. You are one of the artists I liked forward to sing new content from, I'm glad your enjoying this and I cab give back in my own way.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!
love the ch. my vote is for him to spend more time with her feet.
Date: August 05 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!
Glad to see that she's being a little less ruthless in her treatment. Makes me wonder though, if she can influence his enjoyment level magically, why didn't she do it before? Or was she too caught up in her domination of him to even think about whether or not he was enjoying it? Makes her a bit selfish if that's the case, what with him spending half his birthday in fear and pain.
Author's Response:
I will say when I began writing this I had an idea that quickly grew into something else.
I initially had a witch her husband and shrinking as s template. Everything else cane and still is coming from the seat of my pants. I have no idea what will be in the next chapter, or where they will go for his birthday. all I know is that she will have him in her clothing or in her body somewhere.
I guess what I an getting at is I didn't know she would manipulate his enjoyment when i started writing, she just did and I flew with it when I liked it.
But assuming she always could I can agree she may be a bit selfish. But then again she is big, impulsive, in control, and enjoying herself. I think impulsiveness plays more a factor than selfishness in her treatment. Thank you for your review, I enjoy them all even criticism, and it wasn't all ctitical either
[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!
Back of panties, most definitely needs to get more aquainted with her rear.
Date: August 05 2014 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!
Foot.