I agree, the unaware moments in this story is fantastic! I love how Julia is basically putting Zack in positions to be tortured by the other girls.

Kiana must have felt Zack entering her cleavage, unless his body was so insignificant to her boobs that she never felt him. Either way seems reasonable.

The only way now that Zack can escape without being detected is if he slips through her boobs and ends up into another crazy situation.

Another idea is if the party is over, and Julia leaves Zack stuck with Kiana, the hottest girl of the three. Im wondering if Kiana has any other hot family members (Mom, sister). With one hot person, there is likely to be others that resemble the same traits.

Or Julia can spot Zack if he falls to the floor. Then she can take him home to her "lair". (Does Julia even know if Zack is with Kiana?)

There are many possibilities, my friend. I just love stories where one giantess is aware of the tiny, and the other giantess(es) are unaware of him.

Keep up the good work, and Happy New Year!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for this review! I'm glad that you are liking the story. I'm also happy that you shared your thoughts and ideas, and I will certainly take them into consideration. As for your having Zack stuck with Kiana and family idea...heh heh. I don't want to spoil anything, but if you stick around you may get to see some action some time down the road! Some day...