[Report This]Date: February 11 2015 8:26 PM Title: The Void
Well,.. this was certainly a strange turn... The simple fantasy, has just turned into a nightmare.
Anyone in Cassies position might become even more evil, given such power over other people,... but, she seems to be concentrating all of her efforts upon Eric. Even her other victims are sacrificed right in-front of him,.. Not to mention, that Cassie even asked Eric for suggestions!
It doe's 'feel' real though, I could see an intelligent female becoming just like Cassie. I've even known some that were just as nice, ( and very pretty) that would probably be even worse...
I like your discriptions,... the inner-thoughts and Eric's narrative interjections that seem to project the full effect of the horrible atmosphere that surrounds him.
Good stuff,... you make it look simple, but,.. I can see that you've put some work into this! I like it! ;`)
Author's Response:
:D
Thank you, I appreciate it! I tried to make it apparent that her focus was, and will be on Eric.
I appreciate the kind words c: