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Reviewer: deviant Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Prison of Her Own

Interesting chapter.  I was so hoping that Jack would be given the opportunity to confront Carly.  Sounds unlikely.  I'm curious to see where you take her.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I wouldn't count out a confrontation just yet, though...

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