[Report This]Date: June 26 2016 5:46 PM Title: Tom's Story
Looks like things have become far more complicated for Lina.
Author's Response:
Absolutely but Lina is still very much in the game...
Date: June 24 2016 5:00 PM Title: Tom's Story
God Jessica and Janine keep blaming eachother, yet they are both as bad as eachother
I would like to see some sort of 1 on 1 interaction with Jessica and Tom because Jessica was right, It's not fair, her sister, mom, and the nurse all had him, so she should too.
Author's Response:
Lol sibling rivalry at its finest. We'll see if jessica gets her shot. Not sure yet. Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: June 20 2016 7:57 PM Title: Tom's Story
Well, at least we can both agree that only Time will tell which one of us is right. Seeing as how Duggernaut won't! :P
Can I have a "Lol! Amen?"
Author's Response:
It will definitely be one of those things, except maybe not quite as it might contain elements of that other thing without engaging too many snippets from the first thing trying not to obfuscate it with threads from those other things. i hope this helps paint the direction I'm currently inclined to follow. :D
Date: June 20 2016 6:54 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Carycomic: I don't know, Raphaella is her sister and Tom is her nephew. I'm not sure she would help Janine.
Author's Response:
Don't know for sure... :)
[Report This]Date: June 20 2016 5:16 PM Title: Tom's Story
Brilliant job with the emotions! The descriptive writing was extremely thorough and very engaging. I could practically feel the spoiled attitude of Jessica and the teary-eyed sorrow of Janine jumping off the page!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was hoping it came across as readable and too overly cheesy.
Date: June 17 2016 8:08 PM Title: Tom's Story
Hey Duggernaut.....600 reviews!!!!!!
Another milestone after another.
So many quality characters and it's amazing how they are all connected to the story.
Looking forward to Katie and Cassidy round 2 with Tom.
Author's Response:
I know! Crazy right?
Date: June 17 2016 8:07 PM Title: Tom's Story
Welcome to giantes world Hyperdrain!
Author's Response:
Echo the sentiment!
Date: June 17 2016 6:22 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Carycomic I don't think she'd go that far and she can't shrink people anyway. Otherwise she wouldn't obsess over Tom, since she could just shrink some other guy.
Author's Response:
ZAP! Instant shrunken plaything, except, well Tom is Tom and there is something about him :D
Date: June 17 2016 10:20 AM Title: Tom's Story
@Hector,
Good point, I did forget about Tess's intentions. You are right that if Lina and Tess do talk it over, they probably won't agree.
Hmm. I think Lina will still fix this. I just don't know how.
Author's Response:
Muwahaha!
Date: June 17 2016 1:39 AM Title: Tom's Story
@TomSpeedy: You forget that Tess wants Raphaella to find Tom and she was planning on telling her the truth. So why would Tess help Lina, when Tess herself has said she thinks Tom would be safer with their mother Raphaella?
Tess and Lina have vastly different and incompatible goals here. Tess wants her brother safely with their mother, Lina wants custody of the boy.
They are not going to help each other on this.
Author's Response:
Excellent counterpoint, ;)
Date: June 16 2016 10:30 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Hector and @Carycomic
I think Tess will contact Lina after her mistake in her text. Then together, they will create some false alibi to convince Raphaella that Tom is ok.
I don't think Lina will do anything to keep Raphaella physically contained, but rather try changing her mind about her son. After all, Lina's strength is her wordplay and negotiations. I think she will be ready the next time she talks to Raphaella. And this time, Tess will help her.
Author's Response:
So many different ways to go... :D
Date: June 16 2016 9:48 PM Title: Tom's Story
Except kidnapping Raphaella would only make things worse for Lina, especially since it would be mighty suspicious if Raphaella and Tom were missing.
Lina is smarter than that.
Author's Response:
Lina is very clever. Maybe just a straight up hit? nope, too messy.
Date: June 16 2016 12:26 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Carycomic She doesn't need to hijack Raphaella's limo or anything like that. Lina got her to stay at her place, remember?
Date: June 11 2016 3:43 PM Title: Tom's Story
As @AprilJoinerWeb said, next chapter is chapter 100, and I can't help but wonder what you have in store.
Author's Response:
While I would love to tell you it is everything you would hope for. .. nope dual cliffhanger.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2016 9:29 PM Title: Tom's Story
Hope this means Tom's mom will show up soon and i do hope she finds Tom.
Author's Response:
There will be some story around Raphaella very very soon...
Date: June 07 2016 9:36 PM Title: Tom's Story
Do you recognize how crazy it is that this story has been viewed 607k times!?
Author's Response:
Hi mercs2 thank for the review. It is absolutely amazing this story has garnered so much attention. I am most certainly humbled by its reception and only hope it continues to entertain.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2016 7:41 PM Title: Tom's Story
Well this changes everything :O You should have something crazy happen to Tom at the end of chapter 100
Author's Response:
Talk about elder abuse... while I recognize this chapter doesn't necessarily meld well with the remainder of the story I thought it added a nice little twist. As for chapter 100 ( how crazy is that?) I'm not sure yet how to make it stand out.
Date: June 06 2016 9:08 AM Title: Tom's Story
@Duggernaut:
I mean, so far, every woman owned Tom only one day/night or max few days. So on one side we could see various female personalities but on the other side there was not a chance to explore them deeper. I mean all females got just a little taste of Tom but did not have a chance to further explore their fantasies - they just scratched the surface :-).
So I was thinking it could be interesting if the environment settles a bit and Cassidy and Katie could evolve in their dominant roles and Tom could become their submissive eager little slave.
Just imagine, if Cassidy and Katie just started to scratch the surface what could it be if they can continue and take full advantage of Tom? ;-)
I think other character who would be nice to explore is Lina. However I see many disruptive aspects there - especially her daughter Janine. Maybe if Janine somehow realizes she does not have to be abusive - after all Tom is submissive and enjoys to be dominated and also he was always attracted by her. So there is no point to be abusive in order to use him her way. But I am afraid this is a strong part of her personality which cannot be changed so easily.
So I am curious how the mother will affect the direction of the story. She will need to excuse Tom in the school but I guess she will not want to announce he shrank. Probably she will want some female authority to take care of her son so that he is safe. Maybe Cassidy, Katie, Lina and mother could meet all together and decide what is the best for Tom and how to take care of him and how to share him, so that little one gets what he needs :-)
Author's Response:
There a still so many options available. The katie Cassidy dynamic is intestine and you're right he does seem to chamge hands quite frequently so...
Author's Response:
There a still so many options available. The katie Cassidy dynamic is intestine and you're right he does seem to chamge hands quite frequently so...
Date: June 05 2016 8:14 AM Title: Tom's Story
@ LT: I would rather he finally experience Jessica Lindholm or Serena At-Law! But, that--as they say--is just me.
;-D
Author's Response:
I think it's about time Tom and Jessica meet face to...hmm we'll I guess I'lljust have to figure that out ;)
Date: June 04 2016 8:50 PM Title: Tom's Story
@TomSpeedy: You almost sound like your spoofing SOUND OF MUSIC.
"These are a few of my favorite things..." ;-D