[Report This]Date: May 26 2016 1:56 PM Title: Tom's Story
Well, I for once got so scared this time. Why? Well Duggernaut was uploading a bunch of other stories and also, like the chapter before this one, Duggernaut said that "he was conflicted" and didn't know where to go with this story since I kept insisting that Miss Harwood keeps him, but another reviewer said that they wanted Tom's mom involved.
So I thought this meant that Duggernaut was going to make some changes. Then I see this chapter and it felt so real that I couldn't tell if this was the end or not. Then Duggrnaut answers my review "it's been a good run" and I go bananas thinking that this is the end at the other stories are taking over.
Now that I see your most recent reply, I guess I can relax knowing that there is more in store for Tom. You got me good, but it's the rise of your new stories that good me worried.
Let's say Tom did hurt by her foot and survives. Katie picks up Tom, takes him to Cassidy, she nurses him, and they have fun.
But I hope this happens instead: Tom dodges the foot completely and as she walks past him, he gets a view of her gorgeous backside. Then she walks back toward her bed and Tom follows. She notices the empty panties, scans the floor, and finds Tom staring at her from behind. She declares him a peeper and "punishes" Tom.
Yeah, Tom survived much worse. If he gets hurt here, well that just seems silly. I mean of all things, a foot. Now I see how I overreacted so fast.
Well I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: May 25 2016 8:32 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Duggernaut, Noooooooo! If Tom were to die, it should be inside a vagina. Not this.
Why you gotta reply to my review like that? Please upload next chapter soon, so I don't dread over this for 4 days.
Author's Response:
Tom please. You of all people, you who has diligently followed all of my stories should know better than anyone how I write. So encourage you to consider this chapter closely. :)
[Report This]Date: May 16 2016 2:11 PM Title: Tom's Story
Every single time I read this story as it is updated, I'm impressed. And every time I reread it, I pick up more and more. "Harwood"? The way you describe her (physically, personally, etc) makes me think her name should be "Hard Wood", which perfectly describes most of the readers on here, I s'pose! Ammmmmaaaaaaaazing!
Date: May 15 2016 12:03 PM Title: Tom's Story
@AprilJoinerWeb,
Janine is 18 and Cassidy is 27. Miss Harwood went to school with Cassidy so she might be around 27 as well. Tom should be 18 since he and Janine are classmates. Lina, I'm not sure but I'm guessing around 40.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2016 9:03 PM Title: Tom's Story
Sone of her students must have noticed her having an orgasm, right?
By the way, how much longer till Tom's mother show up? I'm really looking forward to her appearance and i do hope she finds out about his condition. And who knows? Maybe it won't be as bad as he thinks and maybe she'll compromise on him having his adventures.
Provided she knows he's safe of course.
Date: May 10 2016 8:11 PM Title: Tom's Story
@AprilJoinerWeb,
Well, most stories don't even bother to mention periods. I think it's one of those things we take into account as part of their everyday lives so people usually don't talk about.
It could be similar to eating and using the bathroom. Everyone does it, but stories don't have these parts written multiple times a day.
Date: May 07 2016 9:09 AM Title: Tom's Story
Hmm. A clear plastic tube about 5 inches long.....and I still can't figure out what it is for.
Now I'm excited. Probably becuase this is becuase this next thing will be very creative.
Is it hollow so he can put his dick inside it? Hollow for Katie to put it in his mouth and force him to drink stuff from it? Hollow becuase ....well honestly, I don't know.
I'm hoping this becomes another mind bender because my mind is bending just to find this hollow tube's purpose.
And I still can't find a use for the rubber bands. It has to be to tie him up right?
Man, this is like some giantess puzzle. But it's fun thinking about this. I like cliff hangers like this, especially since I have no idea what is going to happen becuase these clues don't help me get the big picture.
Man, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: May 05 2016 1:47 AM Title: Tom's Story
I'm probably overthinking this pen device that Katie is making, but I just want to make a good guess about the next chapter, but I have no idea what she is doing with the pen.
And I have no idea what the rubber bands are for. Only idea I can think of is using the rubber bands to tie Tom to the pen.
Of course, rubber bands are one of my favorite giantess materials, following tape and string.
I really want to get some clues on what she is making and if I can understand what is going on this chapter, then I can make a better assumption.
Author's Response:
Hey Tom at the non writing end of a Bic disposable pen it a small plastic plug or stopper that is difficult to remove. When the refill or ink tube and writing ball and this stopper are removed Miss Harwood is left with a clear hollow plastic tube about 5 inches in length. Hope that helps.
Date: May 05 2016 1:42 AM Title: Tom's Story
In response to your response to my review:
So for the fabric, there is no head, neck or shoulders peeping out of the pocket? His whole body is below the opening of the pocket?
So Tom is staring and feeling her parts through the fabric, no actual contact? Man, that must be blurry for him. If his whole body is in that snug fabric, it reminds me of a Vacbed. (Don't ask me how I learned about that. Lol.)
Also, I had to look up what a pen stopped was. I learned that it was a fancy thing attached to the cap of the pen. However, I don't think Bic pens have this type of stopper and if it did, Miss Harwood already removed the cap.
In addition, when the pushpin punctures the tube, you mean the refill tube or the plastic tube of the pen itself?
Lastly, you mentioned the pushpin puncturing the stopper. Now I'm wondering what is this "stopper" you are talking about.
Thanks.
[Report This]Date: May 04 2016 5:15 PM Title: Tom's Story
Coming from someone who doesn't dig shrink or abuse/domination stories, I nevertheless find yours well written and gripping. The characters are nuanced, the plot is interesting and filled with twists that don't feel contrived, and the pacing is excellent.
If only one or two of the leading ladies actually cared for Tom's enjoyment and pleasure as well as their own, as well as a bit more focus on his experiences, it would be one of my all time favorites. Of course, I completely understand that those themes are simply not what is intended here, and that the focus is more on the ladies themselves with Tom featuring more as a (witty and charismatic) prop. This is absolutely no condemnation of your story, because it does what it's intended to do incredibly well.
I look forward to all future installments (except those with Janine) No offense intended, the abuse themes just aren't my thing.
Great work!
Author's Response:
Hi White Wolf, thank you for your feedback, I greatly appreciate it. I have found the whole power corrupts theme to be fairly prevalent in many of my stories, though you make a very valid point in suggesting we actually find someone who is above debasing him or loses herself to the power. I had intended for Cassidy to represent that but even with that character, the size inequality has been influencing their 'relationship'. I too have stumbled across stories where the writing is great though the subject material is not quite my inclination. :)
Date: April 28 2016 8:10 PM Title: Tom's Story
When I said sew to her underwear, I didn't mean like the needle goes through his arms or legs or anything.
What I meant was 4 little strings from her panties are looped around his wrists and ankles holding his spread eagle.
Imagine that you are tied up to a bed and your limbs are pointing to a bed post. Like the rope tied to you is also tied to the bed post. Imagine the bed as a pair of panties.
Also, he wouldn't be exactly stuck forever to her panties. Just 4 little snips of some scissors on the little strings will set him free.
While the little pocket in Miss Harwood's panties is great, I think the spread eagle position would've made his genitals and head more exposed.
Well, if you already understood what I meant by being sewn into her panties, then ignore this post.
If I changed your perception of it, then I hope it helps.
Date: April 25 2016 10:16 AM Title: Tom's Story
Technically the monster has no name, but ok.
Author's Response:
You are correct sir! Yes!
Date: April 24 2016 5:43 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Carycomic: The mad Scientist?
[Report This]Date: April 21 2016 2:52 PM Title: Tom's Story
The fact that she didn'tseem all that concerned that he almost died is kinda worrying.
Date: April 21 2016 12:36 PM Title: Tom's Story
@TomSpeedy, yes I know that story. When you mentioned you remember one story whith that feeling I recalled exactly that story and that chapter but I was hoping you meant some other story :-)
Date: April 20 2016 1:56 AM Title: Tom's Story
But don't jump straight to that chapter. You have to start from the beginning or at least read the previous 5 chapters. (I recommend starting from chapter 1.)
Date: April 20 2016 1:53 AM Title: Tom's Story
@licktoy,
It's already a popular story, but if you haven't read it, follow the directions below:
In my profile, go to my favorite stories and select the story with the longest title. (The one with 5 words and ends in the word "giantess").
In that story, my heart was racing on chapter 40. If you haven't read it, I'm sure you will like it since we seem to have similar interests.
Date: April 20 2016 12:47 AM Title: Tom's Story
@TomSpeedy: I understand you do not want to advertise other stories here. But if you experienced such heart beating I would really like to read it :-) Would it be possible you provide the name or link to that story please? I think Tom's story will not be harmed if you do so.
[Report This]Date: April 19 2016 7:25 PM Title: Tom's Story
Every time this story is updated, I can't get to the second to last chapter quick enough. Amazing this way is going. Like figure skaters, always seeming to go in circles yet perxpel the audience with such wonderful jumps and grace.
Keep it up, mon ami.
Date: April 19 2016 1:18 PM Title: Tom's Story
I remember when there were 400 reviews, I predicted that there will be 600 or 700 reviews. Hey, it could happen.
This student teacher relationship reminds me of the movie "That's my boy". Funny but silly movie. Hot teacher though.
I really liked one of licktoy's ideas.
"And although he may be scary or afraid he is excited to be turned into her little sex-slave - only a true submissive can be turned on by this :-)."
This is the feeling that I have seen in only 1 story. I don't want to advertise other stories here, but in that story, I felt so scared, my heart was pounding so hard, yet, I was excited! It was so sexy and the main character was trapped and he knew this was going to happen to him. He didn't like it becuase he was about to be trapped by this hot woman, but I was craving it.
I would love to see Tom get excited but nervous with Katie. One example was the ending of the last chapter where Tom was being tied to the dildo. He knew something sexy and bad was about to happen, and for me, my heart was beating pretty good becuase I knew what was coming. If the dildo was panties instead, I think my heart would skip a beat.
You said you were just getting started. Perhaps, my mind will be blown away again!
I can't wait for the next chapter!