Date: February 15 2016 11:29 AM Title: Tom's Story
@Carycomic,
"Tom please sign this plea deal stating that you are guilty of all charges and that you will be sentenced to worshipping giantess women for the rest of your life".
The dream!
Author's Response:
Sentenced to doing time in the hole...
Date: February 07 2016 9:25 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Cary, there is very little of it, you could just close your eyes during those parts because Im sure you would LOVE the rest of it. ;)
But back to Jessica, I'll be happy even if its just her that gets a hold of Tom for a little one on one fun. I want to know what kind of giantess she is!
Date: February 01 2016 10:24 PM Title: Tom's Story
Really excited about mom showing up, looking forward to some mother son interactions
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to share a review. Not sure yet whether I"ll take this story down that mother/son road, but who knows, sometimes the story writes itself.
Date: January 29 2016 10:02 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Duggernaut,
If it's too involved, just work with all the characters you have right now.
Make some deeper relations in more intimate ways.
One of my favorite things you write about are when one women has a tiny and someone else is unaware that the tiny is with them. Remember Sophie hiding Ted's son from Ted? That was awesome. Maybe something similar like that can happen with Lina/Janine hiding Tom while they talk to Raphaella.
You could have Tom join Cassidy on an adventure while she works on patients. After a long day at the hospital, Tom can cheer her up.
Janine and Lina could make some sort of deal where they share Tom and exchange him after every few days.
Cassidy could be Tom's personal nurse if he gets hurt or if Janine does something crazy.
We could have 3somes, but it feels weird putting two women of different ages and experience together with Tom.
Tess could visit once in a while and eventually let Lina take care of him.
After Janine admitting to all her faults, maybe she will treat Tom less cruelly if she gets Tom back again.
I loved the beginning parts where Janine takes Tom to school with her. I mentioned Cassidy taking Tom to work with her, and perhaps Lina could take Tom with her places as well. (Vacation maybe?)
There are many possibilities left to create. We don't need more characters to make it interesting. I'd say it's the sexy fun that makes it interesting. That's why many people want the "giantess action" becuase it's the sex and naughty stuff that we are into.
We got the characters, so let's have some fun.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: January 29 2016 12:18 PM Title: Tom's Story
I just couldn't resist saying that I was first. It feels somewhat satisfying to address it.
As for Raphaella, I'm not that familiar with Italian women, but I was surprised by the name becuase it's new to me.
Author's Response:
I think you mentioned ninja turtle during one of your first reviews. :P
Date: January 20 2016 10:28 PM Title: Tom's Story
I did some thinking and I realized that Tom is probably thinking that Tess is still looking for him when he disappeared from her dorm.
Janine never let Tom communicate to Tess so this was actually his first chance, and this message actually is Tom's way of telling Tess that he is all right since his disappearance.
Now I see why Tom didn't mention the car crash. He is just letting Tess know about his location, his health, and who is taking care of him. Just the important stuff was sent in that message.
Got it.
Author's Response:
Bingo!
Date: January 20 2016 10:21 PM Title: Tom's Story
Well, in my ch. 51 review, I had 3 possibilities and only the 1st one was that Janine wasn't going to crash and it was just a scare. My other two involved her being injured becuase of a crash.
Author's Response:
I think presenting a variety of possibilities actually helps relay to me a number of threads some of which I had not considered. I love that you are invested in the story and that it has not become too one dimensional. I know several chapters back there was some discussion on how this story was losing depth.
Date: January 16 2016 1:36 AM Title: Tom's Story
@Maximus: It's more likely than you think. It's not uncommon for people to come to a realization of how they have acted after a life threatening accident.
Author's Response:
Very true
Date: January 15 2016 9:30 PM Title: Tom's Story
Haha! First Tomspeedyitis, now too much sugar?
I just like to imagine random stuff in these stories and sometimes I get carried away.
Yeah, the murder thing won't likely happen. I just surprised of Lina's agressiveness and I was open to any possibilities of what she will do to Cassidy. I think Lina will just confront Cassidy at her house or during Cassidy's next shift. Then she might just ask for Tom. The murder thought was just a "what if" moment. That's all.
[Report This]Date: January 15 2016 5:00 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Carycomic,
Well, with my long reviews, there will be always parts that may not make sense or mistakes that I did not intend to say.
While you make a good point about Jessica probably going to make a return by using the same detective agency as Lina, perhaps Jessica will be oblivious to the whole situation just like her father.
Also, Jessica knows that Tom is a boy from school that Janine goes to and that he is Tess's brother. Jessica will probably assume that there is some relationship triangle between the three kids but I don't think it's that important for her to go further and search for information about Tom.
Lastly, my reviews attract conversations becuase I assume lots of stuff that is most likely not true, but I'm also playing the guessing game that Duggernaut provides within each cliffhanger. So my opinions may seem unlikely, but you never know what can happen given this complex story.
The good thing about disagreements is the conversation that comes out of it. Let's have some fun.
Date: January 14 2016 7:02 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Tom Speedy: I don't know, he's unconscious at the moment. So she wouldn't gain anything by faking concern. Not until he regains consciousness.
Date: January 12 2016 8:20 PM Title: Tom's Story
@aaron,
That long shot sounds awesome.
@HectorVanDyne,
Good point. However, I think she is just trying to be nice to gain his trust so she can get what she wants. I think she has her own agenda to deal with Tom. It makes me suspicious.
Author's Response:
Can't someone just be nice for the sake of being nice? :)
Date: January 12 2016 9:44 AM Title: Tom's Story
@TomSpeedy: Because she's being gentle and botheredto check if he was alive and well. She's also not being mean in anyway.
Author's Response:
There was some quote somewhere about still waters.
Date: January 09 2016 12:39 AM Title: Tom's Story
@Duggernaut: I thought as much, especially since Addison decided to inform Tess after Janine too Tom again. I am curious how that conversation went.
And yes, i am a fan of Tom and Lina together. They really seem to enjoy each others company. Though Addison was fun too in her own way, especially because of her attitude and vocabulary.
Author's Response:
Lina was a nice match for Tom as their relationship developed. Miss Addison was bull dozed by Janine but Lina is another matter altogether
Date: January 08 2016 5:13 AM Title: Tom's Story
@HectorVanDyne,
I'm glad I'm not the only rooting for Lina to find Tom.
@Alethia1000,
You may be on to something. Perhaps a nurse or whomever put the catheter inside Janine has accidentally pushed Tom further inside Janine's vagina so deep that she can't even feel him inside her. The catheter may have even knocked Tom unconscious and if he doesn't move then Janine can't notice his presence as easily.
In addition, Janine's critical condition results in her feeling all sorts of things on her body such as pains and wires attached to her. Furthermore, when Janine called out Tom, maybe it was directed toward Lina to check her vagina. Sure, that may sound weird and risky, but I bet Janine just wants to know if Tom is alive and letting Lina know wouldn't be that bad.
Date: January 08 2016 1:36 AM Title: Tom's Story
I have a question about miss Addison. Would she have threatened to kill Tom had it been Tessa that confronted her instead of Janine. I mean since Tess would have probably not turned the the discussion hostile(unless she thinks Addison has harmed Tom) and wouldn't have blackmailed her (which seemed to be what made Addison make that threat).
Because i got the impression things only escalated because of Janine.
Author's Response:
Janine deliberately bulldozed Miss Addison into a corner to establish dominance. Tess would have tried to either use a more diplomatic approach or clandestine avenue. The discussion would certainly have been different between Tess and the teacher, probably without blackmail or death threats.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2016 1:28 AM Title: Tom's Story
Looks like karma got Janine. Unfortunately, it seems Tom might have become collateral damage.
Still, i'm hopping this leads to a reunion with Lina at least.
Author's Response:
TomSpeedy is in the same corner and right now Tom's fate is unknown, but never lose hope, anything could happen!
Date: January 05 2016 10:52 PM Title: Tom's Story
Congrats on 300 reviews!
Author's Response:
Wow 300 is awesome. I just hope to keep the story engaging enough to keep it enjoyable for all those who have taken the time to invest in this tale.
Date: December 17 2015 8:05 PM Title: Tom's Story
Never mind my previous post. I envisioned digestion to be a much faster process.
Date: December 12 2015 4:51 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Duggernaut,
I think I was too early becuase I saw you updated "Michaels story" and the "Nefarious Nine". I reviewed those probably like minutes after you posted them. Then I went offline becuase "Tom's Story" wasn't posted yet, so I didn't check again last night.
Now I see that you did post Tom's Story yesterday and I was too quick to recheck the most recent page. Well, now I know.
@Carycomic,
I enjoy reviewing first becuase that way others can reply to my review after they read the story since I tend to break down the chapter. Part of me just doesn't want to be late to the party.
Author's Response:
And I added another chapter (5) to the nefarious nine after you reviewed chapter 4 :)