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Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2016 7:55 AM Title: Tom's Story

Tom was probably overdone and pull deep the unknown lands ?? 



Author's Response:

All good things must come to an end...

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2016 3:12 AM Title: Tom's Story

It is the most famous story full page. This is a great it says.
you feel like you're there too
I will say one thing
Please more
I look forward to the next chapter



I'm sorry, my english is bad



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Bartek. The story is not yet complete so there will be some more. Your English is fine :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2016 5:52 PM Title: Tom's Story

Carycomic,

I actually think that this voodoo doll idea is a hoax. Tess is just trying to make Tom feel alright be saying something that can get Tom to crack a joke.

This voodoo doll thing seems way to big to go unnoticed. I'm calling this whole ordeal a bluff.

So, once again, I doubt that your sorority idea will ever happen, especially with voodoo dolls.

Author's Response:

Only the shadow knows...

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2016 4:39 PM Title: Tom's Story

I also hope we see miss Addison one last time. 

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2016 8:25 PM Title: Tom's Story

Will we see Miss Addison again? I am wondering what her current state of mind is. She informed Tess about Janine taking Tom. So it seemed like she was concerned and maybe guilty since she did threaten to kill Tom when Janine blackmailed her.

She didn't seem like a bad person overall, so i wonder if she regretted making the threat. By the way, did Tom hear the threat? He hasn't brought it up. 



Author's Response:

I think the Miss Addison character may only be seen in passing. She had her chance and was outplayed.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2016 6:44 PM Title: Tom's Story

Ancient Relic,

Nice catch. I didn't even know that this story has become that popular to be compared to some of the greats.

What's more amazing is that this story is on both of those top tens and it's not even 1 year old!!! The next youngest one is from 2012! Incredible!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2016 9:25 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Cary, there is very little of it, you could just close your eyes during those parts because Im sure you would LOVE the rest of it. ;)

 

But back to Jessica, I'll be happy even if its just her that gets a hold of Tom for a little one on one fun. I want to know what kind of giantess she is!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2016 9:44 AM Title: Tom's Story

@TomSpeedy: Because she's being gentle and botheredto check if he was alive and well. She's also not being mean in anyway. 



Author's Response:

There was some quote somewhere about still waters.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2015 4:51 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Duggernaut,

I think I was too early becuase I saw you updated "Michaels story" and the "Nefarious Nine". I reviewed those probably like minutes after you posted them. Then I went offline becuase "Tom's Story" wasn't posted yet, so I didn't check again last night.

Now I see that you did post Tom's Story yesterday and I was too quick to recheck the most recent page. Well, now I know.

@Carycomic,

I enjoy reviewing first becuase that way others can reply to my review after they read the story since I tend to break down the chapter. Part of me just doesn't want to be late to the party.

Author's Response:

And I added another chapter (5) to the nefarious nine after you reviewed chapter 4 :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2015 6:13 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Writteninthestars, I'm glad I'm not alone.

I can't even find the chat box to discuss this. I feel like popular stories like this one are the new chat boxes, haha.

I would not go that far that it is disgusting, but yes, I prefer the other layout much better. This new one seems more modern, but it seems to be missing lots of stuff, and I personally do not like the colors.

Yeah, I also hope a fix arrives soon.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2015 9:59 PM Title: Tom's Story

This new website change is not the best skin in my opinion. Is there a way to change it?

Also, anyone know where is the chat box?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2015 7:43 AM Title: Tom's Story

@Maximus: I'm anal-retentive! And proud of it! :P

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2015 9:01 PM Title: Tom's Story

@gadget,

The main character is supposed to represent me. Lol.

Author's Response:

This story was predicated by a request from Tom with parameters identified by him. It seems to have found an audience more so than any other my other offerings, so good show Tom!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2015 8:58 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Maximus

Hey I never said the story was badly written, in fact it's one of my favorites on this site now that I've caught up on it. And I'm not saying EVERY character is lacking personality, just the main character, he feels a bit like a perverted dude camera to me, who sometimes goes entire chapters without uttering a word. Every other character though has a distinct personality. And you're right this story IS leaning more towards erotica than a simple story, again, nothing wrong with that. In fact my main story is mostly erotic and nothing else to be honest.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 10:47 AM Title: Tom's Story

I think Tess or someone should fart on him.. Either when he is trapped in the box with it or disposed in the back of her panties!! Farting teaches the tinies a lesson lol!! But so far so good! Add more booty and it will be an 11/10 lol I LOVE this story!! Add that ass gas hahaha

Author's Response:

I know you are a true dedicant to ass and gas. There will but play coming and I've another story in the works called Nasty as a request. The title says it all. Just going to wrap up a few stories before publishing anything new though.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 11:50 PM Title: Tom's Story

Ha, so Tom was inside after all. He certainly wasted no time in sexing up Sam right away, no shame at all!



Author's Response:

Tom is like a raging hormone, or as he would say, "Living the dream," and eventually some dreams can spiral out of control and become a nightmare.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 3:43 PM Title: Tom's Story

@carycomic,

I totally forgot about the maid. I hope she does not get Tom. I prefer Lina, Janine, Sam, and then the maid.

I prefer the maid to be oblivious to this whole situation.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2015 9:12 PM Title: Tom's Story

That review took so long that it timed out, and I had to login again and copy and paste it back.

Long reviews are a good sign. It means that it was a great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks tom, glad I still have your attention and am still following the path you set down

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2015 7:03 PM Title: Tom's Story

Tom bought himself time , at least until Karolina finds him or she leaves the room. 



Author's Response:

For now...

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