Date: July 07 2008 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
I really enjoyed this chapter, his plight had a good balance of struggle and yet plot continuation as we for the first time really got to see seth advance as a person. As he realized that Kari had moved on, whether he goes off the deep end or falls into a even greater form of misery has yet to be determined, however i really like how this story is evolving.
Especially, since its quite rare to see a stories plot driven by the character development in this community. On top of that, the sex scene was written great.
The only thing i didnt quite get was the numbers part towards the beginning but i read this right when i got up today(yeah i was lazy before work) and i could have just missed something.
Either way, everything is moving nicely, this is the kind of story I could see turned into a lifetime movie.