Reviews For Not The Way You Wanted
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Date: May 06 2019 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: May 06 2019 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this very short story, and very much hope you expand this world into a much larger body of works. You use words well, and easily conveyed his precarious state despite the mild-mannered way in which she rebuffed him, casually dismissive at first glance, but you know something darker might happen.
I really liked the way I could see her working at her computer while this little man falls into the throes of desperation.
More stories, please!