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Reviewer: tinyslave Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, maybe a bit of editing before publishing would make it even better. Nice narrative style hope to read more from you!

 

Reviewer: gamergasteiz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's a clasical unaware/vore story, with a bit of insertion, but well done. A bit more of aventure, and it would be perfect. Thanks for share your work with us, and keep developing your genious and your stories with us!

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