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Reviewer: MissMello Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2023 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s

Not much to say, other than fantastic story! Giants of yesteryear are very underutilized. I think it'd be interesting if you went back even earlier than the 1300s!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! And I agree! I'm actually going to be opening a poll up on my Discord or Patreon to determine the next time period - so keep an eye out!

Reviewer: Aldo121319 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 01 2023 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s

Excellent story! I’m loving the concept so far and I’m really curious to see what time period our protagonist ends up in next! 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad! I'm actually going to be hosting a poll on my Discord or Patreon for the next time period, if you'd like to vote!

Reviewer: Questathana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2022 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s

A Saffy spinoff would make my day!



Author's Response:

Saffy is super popular! I actually think I might give her her own story spinoff, haha. I'm still waiting on the Patreon numbers to justify an extra 10k word story a month, but that might be hers~!

Reviewer: Jsmith20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2022 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s

I know that you intend to keep him traveling through history, but I would love a version of this story where he just stays with Saffy. She's such a cool character and the dyanmic between the two is so interesting. I hope that you might consider an alternate version where he is with her and only her because the world-building for her era is so cool and I think that the two would have awesome adventures together. 

I love the premise overall, but I think Saffy is written really well and just jumps out of the story and would be amazing to keep reading about. 

Reviewer: zelta229 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2022 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s

Hi, I'm actually Zelta228 but it's been so long I can't even remember what email I used.

Made an account to say that your story really stands out. I especially enjoyed the writing style of the Victorian Era chapter. With art, you know it when you see it. Best of luck!



Author's Response:

Hey! Sorry for the delay.

It really means so much to me to get reviews like this!! I'm thrilled you like it, and I had a ton of fun with the Victorian Era, too! I hope I can continue to put out some great stuff for you to enjoy ^^ 

Reviewer: Croujita Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2022 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s

Very interesting and unique concept. I love that you thought about the language as well.

Would love to see all kinds of regions and timeperiods.

Like, a big hairy cavewoman in the ice age alps, don't think anyone did that before.

A native American girl before Columbus.

Ancient egypt.

Or a historical character like Jeanne D'Arc?


So many possibilities. Really cool idea by you!



Author's Response:

Your feedback means so much - and the best part of the idea, IMO - is that you can explore ALL kinds of possibilities! 

I'm actually launching a Patreon for polls (and maybe commissions,) if you're interested! (There's an early bird special for half off, too! ;)) 
If you ever want to check it out, the link is in my bio! <3 


Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2022 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s

I really like the first chapter. 

Hope to see what happens with Lyra in the next chapter. 

you had a great way of describing the situation and atmosphere her boots create as well as what the tiny traveler was experiencing.

I think a poll would be great :)

(I personally would love to see Egypt, Africa, Greek, Italian, and maybe a Victorian London setting) if he winds up bouncing around to different time frames in those countries/regions. 



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked it! Victorian London is actually a pet favorite of mine too, great taste! 

I'm actually launching a Patreon for polls (and maybe commissions,) if you're interested- there's an early bird special for half off, too! ;) 

https://www.patreon.com/dongus

Reviewer: Feeover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2022 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s

Nice story, the way you describe the scenes is great also the story is very adaptable and interesting.


The poll idea is good but are these gonna be 1 chapter stories?



Author's Response:

I haven't decided yet! I might do several chapters an era, or single-chapter stories with longer chapters. What would you like best?

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 21 2022 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s

Very interesting concept and story so far.  Love the descriptions of Lyra's sweaty and overly worn, stench filled boots.

Being 3 inches tall, wouldn't Lyra stop to take out what is obviously rather big {to her perspective} from her boot? 

Will Lyra find the 3 inch tall / small man in her boot?  If she does, what will Lyra do with him, or will he transport first?

Could Lyra's intense foot odor add energy to his time travel?  Perhaps instead of strictly electricity enabling him to time travel, perhaps extreme foot odor could provide an alternative, short term fuel source.

All great possibilities to a really good story.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked it! I'm hoping to do a chapter a week, and explore different time periods as the main character gets smaller. I actually might start a Patreon for polls to pick the next era, if there's enough interest. 

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