Date: April 10 2022 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Not a bad story, thus far! I read all seven chapters, straight through. :-)
I have to be honest, though. It was a bit of a struggle getting through the ancient dialect simulations. But, on the upside? It makes Saffy's Cockney accent easier to interpret, by comparison!
Looking forward to chapter 8. :-)
Author's Response: I'm super glad you liked it! Part of the reason I decided to go for the middle English was because it would be a struggle to understand it, if you were plucked out of time!
Date: April 04 2022 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ok, I am late to reviewing but dropping one now XD
I love the concept of time travel in size stories, it always opens so many doors to fun content and interaction especially between past and modern day characters and cultural/societal differences. (and misunderstandings)
Your writing in these chapters is very well done, I love the use of language and time specific accents/vocabulary.
Your interaction so far in the chapters has been very evocative, really making the scenes pop out and visualized well when reading.
The in-shoe and foot content have been very sexy and hot to read as well as the tiny traveler's experience with these giantess (to him).
I have to agree with vegetaboy and Jsmith20. Sapphire is my favorite character so far (and the story isn't even far along XD).
Her characters attitude, personality and interaction with the tiny character are very cool, and feel exciting to see how they progress.
I have to also second Jsmtih20's idea. I would love a spin-off centrered around the time traveler sticking with Sapphire (maybe a gltich or broken component to his suit and tech. Maybe the chance of growing back to normal, or slightly bigger, but being stuck in that time, etc) I just would love to read a saphire spin off XD
Keep up the great work, these chapters have been a real gem to read.
Author's Response:
I'm super glad you're enjoying it! It's reviews like this that really keep me going on the difficult days :')
Saffy has been so popular! I'll probably make it a Patreon goal to give her her own spin off, and I actually already have some ideas! ^^
Date: April 04 2022 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
OK so i am loving these Victorian London chapters so far.
Sapphire is great!! I love her attitude and personality and it really shows you had a blast writing these two chapters.
(I kind of want the time traveler to stay here forever XD)
Your description of the inside of Sapphire's shoe and under her foot/sock again were really well done, really puts me into the scene and I loved it.
Again you're doing a great job on the accents/speach patterns of the time.
I can't wait to see what happens with Sapphire next :D