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Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 25 2022 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 2

Characterised as cruel, and our protagonist  definitely delivers on that title. The writing has improved from last chapter as well. But spelling errors are still present. Not much though. Overall, this was very nice.



Author's Response:

Glad you like it! I am using google docs now for writing, so the spelling mistakes should be gone forever, but I know that there are some mistakes, especially in grammar, which look absolutely idiotic to natives while learners do not have a clue they are making them haha Hopefully I will have acquired enough English to sound natural at some point. Please bear in mind that I am using the British spelling. 

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