[Report This]Date: September 25 2022 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Characterised as cruel, and our protagonist definitely delivers on that title. The writing has improved from last chapter as well. But spelling errors are still present. Not much though. Overall, this was very nice.
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! I am using google docs now for writing, so the spelling mistakes should be gone forever, but I know that there are some mistakes, especially in grammar, which look absolutely idiotic to natives while learners do not have a clue they are making them haha Hopefully I will have acquired enough English to sound natural at some point. Please bear in mind that I am using the British spelling.
[Report This]Date: June 30 2022 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
Rather than just crushing people and things with her feet, it would be awesome if she played with the tiny people with her feet like toys. Maybe they could climb her feet or when she gets bigger they could get lost in the wrinkles of her soles! Also if she gets big enough it would be awesome to have her play with a whole cruise ship like a bath toy. It would be great to see the perspective of the tinies on the ship. Great work!
Author's Response:
Why not haha. I will add some foot worship in the next chapter. I also like the idea of playing with a ship. I have thought about it already, although for a separate story. I think it could fit this one later on, though. She might wanna wash herself after all this is over 😂