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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 29 2010 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'll have to deduct one star for poor grammar. A "swan-off" rifle? That's as bad as omitting the "not" in Gunther realizing he was NOT alone!*

*Little kids are SO lucky I don't teach elementary school. ;-)

Author's Response: Yeah, I saw that afterward and was kicking myself. I'm an editor myself and usually catch these things. Doh!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 6

holy $#!T!! that's an impressive chapter. the build up to the climactical conclusion was spectacular.
was worth the wait indeed.
especially liked the way that pixis and raquel's relationship is progressing.

can't seem to say enough 'good' things about this tale. peace

aaron

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