[Report This]Date: December 03 2022 1:14 AM Title: Aerobics Day
Given how many men fall prey to each girl, I wonder if you'll do a chapter that shows how men are mass produced in this society. Like man farms or cloning factories. It would further reinforce men's low place in this world.
Besides that, these are great. You established the setting and tell little stories in it instead of a big long one. A new reader can start with any chapter and not get lost. I've also been obsessed with cruel NWO stories lately so this is right up my alley.
Author's Response:
I originally planned on including a small tidbit in at least one of the chapters, but I decided against it. I figured maybe it was better to leave it to the reader's imagination. Although I do have one idea for a chapter that I may eventually post.
Thanks for reading!