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Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2024 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 11

I really like how in this story and in the previous story you have really ramped up the stakes for our little protagonists.    I very much enjoy how you have devised situations that make sense for Garrick to escape, and I found the twist of slave 4 to be unexpected and very cool!

I realize this story is completed, but I am still looking forward to how things develop when Garrick gets to town.   How he can notify the guards without being caught by the corrupt guard.

Thanks for an interesting story with a great plot, and a real sense of adventure.



Author's Response:

Feels great reading your kind words, glad you like it!

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