[Report This]Date: March 30 2024 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I usually prefer longer stories than this, but this one packed a lot of punch. Most of the shorter stories I've seen on here start something and never finish, failing to provide a meaningful experience. I'd definitely label this one under short but sweet.
I hope you write something like this again in the future!
Author's Response:
I love reviews like this, thank you <3
The constrained format can be difficult sometimes but it can also make a story have more bang for the buck. I'm glad you liked it! I'm working on writing more, though I'm seeing about finishing a long-form story for once lol
[Report This]Date: March 25 2024 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was really good. I like how realistic the cruelty came across, not as an act of malice but of convenience; a split second decision to remove a problem instead of risking the chances of it festering into something scandalous. Kinda feel bad for Alexander, but the dude really should have just charged his phone lol. Oh well, dessert spread-based vore is always top tier, and the vore and foot stuff were well written.
Author's Response:
Hey there! I'm so glad you liked it I really appreciate the review! The dessert spread was actually part of the request from my Valentine for RyukiContest. The only stipulation was that it should include a banana, which I interpreted as an easy chance for vore but I wanted to avoid the classic banana vore. My partner also happens to enjoy that very dessert haha
Thanks again for the review, and for your own participation in the contest! We need to do another contest like it.
[Report This]Date: March 25 2024 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Best story Ive read in a while. Id love to hear more in this universe! I love the aspect where people feel bad/would get in trouble if anyone found out what they did. Great job! Also LOVED the doc martens part
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I would like to write more in this universe. It's basically a loose framework for sizey dystopian capitalism. I think there's a lot of room for more interactions, and love the modern setting for things like Docs and nylons! Thank you for the review, it really means a lot