[Report This]Date: December 18 2025 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
My rating applies only to the first 10 or so chapters,
Anyone else feel this story really went off the rails when it stopped being about just Amanda and Ryan? The first third of it are that, and are an absolute classic. Slow build establishing their playful, loving relationship. The drunk nacho chip scene in chapter 8 (9?) will go down as one of the greats of the genre.
Then out of nowhere it becomes a completely different story with far less compelling characters. Amanda was perfect -- loving, a little ditzy, boundary pushing and unbothered by hers or her brother's nudity without being creepy. That story could have developed into something awesome and then she was just dropped and became a minor character for the last two thirds. I don't get it. I guess that's what the commissioner of the story must have been asking for but it was a huge missed opportunity.
Really hope you or another writer consider doing an alternate revision of this story starting from chapter 10.
Date: March 21 2025 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Came to say same thing as previous comment. Was bummed (pardon the pub) that my favorite moment turned out to be a day dream. Hoping things go a little further at the party.
Author's Response:
Is it a day dream, or is it a premonition? Only time will tell. Stay tuned to find out :)
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2024 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Are you still planning on releasing a chapter in December?
Author's Response:
Unfortunately I didn't get around to finishing the chapter before the holiday madness started. The chapter is mostly complete, but I'm working through finalizing it with the commissioner now. Should go up next monday.
Date: December 10 2024 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter, like the continued world building, with the introduction of other RP's views. Was a bit confused at the sudden use of RP in the kitchen scene instead of Ryan, like was used in most of the scenario, but other than that, really good.
Looking forward to what situations Ryan finds himself in staying with Natalie. Possibly more inattentive shenanigans and perhaps see we'll Natalie learn she likes RP's, just not the way Ryan hopes.
Author's Response:
Yeah it does read a bit odd now that I'm reviewing the chapter. To avoid falling into the trap of just saying "Ryan said this," "Ryan did that," "Ryan ran here," "Ryan looked there," I'll try to mix it up from time to time. Sometimes it's "The tiny man did this," or "The giantess hovered her foot over the shrunken blonde." In that instance I also think I was trying to reintroduce the term reduced person because it would be getting used more in the clinic setting. But I can definitely see how it's a bit jarring now.
Definitely some more time with Natalie in Ryan's immediate future, but we'll have to just wait and see how she acts when Amanda is back at college. Thanks for reading!!
Date: December 06 2024 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
loving this story, your writing and pacing is great. I can’t wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response:
Glad that you're enjoying it, next chapter should be going up on Monday. Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 19 2024 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
The character dynamics in this story have been a real treat, but boy, are Ryan's worse fears being validated in terms of his mom...I know it's the alcohol talking, but her calling him a 'them' now and taunting him to say if he 'feels' like a grown man is CUTTING to come from his mom.
Really on the edge of my seat to see where the character dynamics play out, but I do hope Amanda finds a way to clock this and earnestly stand up to her mom for her brother, because as much as he wants to, Ryan needs to start learning quickly not to pick fights with the far larger ladies in his life and both him and his mom may do something they both regret.
Then there's the baby of the family Brooke kinda vibing and trying to joke with Ryan even considering his new stature, liking her teasing energy as some levity here.
Looking forward to more, the character drama in this story is *chef's kiss*
Author's Response:
Here’s to hoping that the Miller family finds a way to reconcile their differences and come out the other side closer than ever before! But I suspect the road to that particular destination is going to be a bumpy one :)
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2024 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't believe I have not commented on this story yet! I'm enjoying it very much. Can't say much that others here have not already stated, but I certainly want to encourage you to continue.
Although not resolved, I was worried that Ryan's mother was going to be less accepting of his new status. She is more upset about the lack of communication. Of course the story is not over yet.
Also, I assume Ryan's girlfriend is still in the picture somewhere. I thought that once he got his phone back, he would be all over texting her big time and trying to meet up. Looking forward to their physical encounter and how Amanda will react.
Author's Response:
Well, while Natalie is definitely upset about the lying, there certainly is a reason for the tension between them in the first place. And yes, the plan is for Laura to make a return at some point.
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review and thanks so much for reading. New chapter going up soon!
Author's Response:
Well, while Natalie is definitely upset about the lying, there certainly is a reason for the tension between them in the first place. And yes, the plan is for Laura to make a return at some point.
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review and thanks so much for reading. New chapter going up soon!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2024 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is such a fun story with great dynamics. I can't wait to see where it develops. ^w^ Thank you for sharing this with us all!
Author's Response:
So glad that you've enjoyed it! I'm very excited for this next chapter, as I think its going to be a great one. Stay tuned and thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 28 2024 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing. More of Natalie please!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed her. Don't worry, she'll continue to be more involved in the story from here on out. But only time will tell what kind of person she turns out to be.
Thanks so much for reading!
Date: October 07 2024 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Longtime lurker, finally bit the bullet of creating an account. Wanted to thank you for many a good read.
Author's Response:
Thanks for making the effort! I'm glad you decided to make the leap and start posting your own stories. I saw the two that you posted the other day and I've added them to my list to read. Based on the tags, they look to be right up my alley.
Thanks so much for reading!!
Date: September 13 2024 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was my favorite chapter yet by. I love the dynamic of boundaries being crossed when a little tipsy. It's always my favorite.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed! I also enjoy when a character can simply throw their inhibitions to the wind for a little bit. Booze is fun like that.
Thanks for reading!!
Date: September 07 2024 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Holly… Great story can’t wait for chapter 9!
You got a release date? I fucking love your content!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Typically there is a two week wait (at least) between chapters. This is because this is a fully commissioned story and I always alot myself two weeks to work on any typical comm. And in the case of this story, there is a fair amount of back and forth between myself and the commissioner with alterations and additions before I post the chapter. So, I'm very grateful for both your support as well as your patience. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Date: August 21 2024 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: August 04 2024 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter, was awaiting an update to the story. Looking forward to what's to come with the setup of nachos, beer, and his discovery of her "dirty little secret" so to speak.
Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the chapter and I appreciate the patience. Thanks for much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: July 02 2024 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Forgot this from my last review but this really is one of the best gentle teasing stories on the site. Amanda is such a playful and loving companion to her now shrunken brother and that is great to see expressed in a story like this, but it is also great that she can crack jokes and goof around with him.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I don't often do gentle stories, so it's nice to hear that people are enjoying the character. Only time will tell what is coming next, but from my conversations with the commissioner, we can expect plenty more smutty hijinks.
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: May 28 2024 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story a lot. I think the pacing of the plot is fantastic I like how much of each chapter we get to immerse ourselves in Ryan’s story. I really like the characterization of their sibling relationship, how amanda is kind of assuming the role of older sister now and how ryan is adjusting to that. I love the gentle and teasing element of their relationship. I like how comfortable amanda is becoming with the new small presence in her life and I hope we see more encounters with her either messing with ryan playfully or unknowingly. My favorite chapter was 3 I believe thats the one where ryan is walking around her as she sleeps. The accidental fart trap was amazing. I absolutely love that ryan is consistently in the wrong place at the wrong time around amanda, hope to see more of that! Keep up the amazing story!
Author's Response:
Personally, I love a tiny in an unaware fart trap, so we're on the same page there. I'm glad you're enjoying the characters having to adjust the change in dynamic. I would imagine it is a big shift for the both of them, with plenty of unforseen hurdles ahead. I'm glad you're enjoying and I hope you keep reading!
Date: May 26 2024 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a very interesting story! I hope it stays gentle and that the last chapter makes Amanda realize that if she wants Ryan to be closer to her she has to slowly seduce/corrupt him, maybe with her pheromones which will lead to gentle/protective insertion as a way to protect and carry him and maybe down the line or in a sequel series lead to a 3 way between her, Ryan and Hailey. Well that is the kind of story I want but I am sure you and your client will make this a good one can't wait for more hopefully gentle giantess stuff! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it so far. There'll be some tension ahead for sure, but the feeling I get is that the relationship between the two siblings will remain altogether positive. Thanks for reading!
Date: April 30 2024 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
can't wait till he is introduced to mom
Author's Response:
Shouldn't be too long now. Thanks so much for reading!!
Date: April 22 2024 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story rules, if I’m understanding correctly, are the siblings off to meet Laura to get his stuff or something? I’m a bit confused. (Perhaps a tiny Laura awaits the siblings later in the story:p)
Author's Response:
They're actually off to pick up the tiny accommodation gear. It will likely be explained a bit more at the start of the next chapter, but with the whole world coping with a shrinking pandemic, big warehouse style depot stores have popped up all over the place. So Ryan and Amanda are off to pick up their order!
As far as the future goes, your guess is as good as mine. The commissioner is largely dictating where the story will go. I'm just the mouthpiece. Either way, I hope you continue to enjoy. And thanks for reading!!
Date: April 10 2024 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love how Amanda is already comfortable enough to stink and fart around him with no shame at all. Hope to see more of this dynamic
Author's Response:
Well they're siblings, she's got no reason to try to impress him. Although she might need to be a bit more aware of of his inability to avoid the AoE of her expulsions. It ain't easy being tiny.
Thanks for reading!!