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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2024 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

A really great story.  I love the concept of Becca having a shrink ray gun she uses for innocuous purposes; yet can punish her son Ben in unknown ways with it.  Now Jeff has been exposed to coming to Becca knowing that he would be alone with her.

Becca's feet and breasts are obvious objects of lust for Jeff, though let's now forget it was Becca's ass that first attracted Jeff to her.  Perhaps Jeff needs to be more closely acquainted with Becca's ass, just as much as he desires her feet and tits.

I really like how Ben will be gone for a period of time, leaving Jeff alone with Becca, and for her to do with Jeff as she pleases without anyone being suspicious. 

Can't wait to read what happens next.  Terrific story, please keep it going.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. Glad this story has managed to captivate your imagination!

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2024 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

That's a really good story i love chapter 1 and he become way better now

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!!

Reviewer: Raso719 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2024 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

Super fun read so far! I hope we have some fun with the remote's limits, like she makes someone smaller than the remote can track and needs to get help or gets into trouble. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! These are nice ideas

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2024 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

Whoa love the attitude shift from Becca and how she can shrink him even more. Once the shrink ray is working again I'd love to see her go through with that threat and shrink him again instead of growing. Imagine being shrunk 3 times and then being lost to wonder the fabric of her thong ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks! He'd be really microscopic at that point...

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