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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 28 2024 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 4

Really great story.  Can't wait to read more.  Very well written and very provocative.

The obviously assumed relationship between shrunken Jeff and full sized Becca the controller of the shrink ray gun is Super Hot and Sexy.

Can't wait to read more about Becca using / abusing her shrunken Jeff.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm sorry to say, however, the story is finished!

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2024 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 4

Aww that was the end? What a great story, I liked how it all turned out ^-^

I was hoping for some butt stuff especially when he was really small but still it was great!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot :)

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