[Report This]Date: February 14 2025 12:26 AM Title: Golden Opportunity
Beth! BETH!
I read chapter 7 btw
BEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTHHHHHHH!
I fucking love Beth, dude. She was so badass in the bathroom, rescuing Mateo and Emma in the knick of time and lifting Tricia off the floor with one hand. I’ve been eagerly awaiting her return to the spotlight and this moment did not disappoint in the slightest. I’m not even into watersports! Lol
As always, the details surrounding how downsizers live and interact in this world, from the tubes to how they interface with the mixed classes, is really well thought out and interesting. And I continue to love all bureaucracy and the politicking around it, like how Mateo, Beth, and Emma convinced the principal that nothing happened in the bathroom.
But enough of that worldbuilding crap, Beth though! I loved her swooning over Mateo on the bench. She finally gets to hold her favorite downsizer and her obsessing over him and his tiny physique is so adorable. Throughout that middle portion, I was wondering how Beth knew Mateo and Emma were in the bathroom, and then it struck me: “Oh yeah, Beth was probably watching for shrunken Mateo this whole time.” Lol, I was so glad to be right.
The line about how she has the strength to rip a toilet off the wall or tear a phonebook in half, and yet held Mateo so tenderly really encapsulates what I like about gentle size content. The idea that a giant/ess holds so much power over a person, enough to kill them without so much as a thought, and yet decides to keep themself in check and use that power to protect the tiny they care about just has such a strong appeal. That Mateo sees being with Beth as the safest he can be is so sweet.
Also, I gotta respect Mateo for taking things slow, “doing it right,” with Beth. I wouldn’t have had the willpower to turn down her initial offer, but I like his resolve here. Mainly because I’m a sucker for cute dates (and cute dates inevitably lead to the sexier stuff down the line). Plus slow burns lead to more explosive payoffs anyway. And given that ending, I think I’m in store for quite a slow burn (unless Mateo can escape from his mom to get back to Beth lol)
So yeah, if I said I was hooked on this story before, now I’m downright glued to it. Which means it should only take me one month this time to read the next chapter XD
Date: July 15 2024 8:42 PM Title: Golden Opportunity
How did I manage to overlook this story?!?
Damn man it's great! Love the world and the characters you build. Definetly have to check out the rest of your Stories.
This was my favorite Chapter so far! I really enjoyed the golden shower scene. I'm really hooked how the story will progress.
Thank you for the great story!
Greetings from Germany
Author's Response:
Yo! Thank you for your comment. I'm happy to hear you're enjoying. Be sure to recommend it to others! :)
[Report This]Date: June 23 2024 1:26 AM Title: Golden Opportunity
Wow. Great chapter. We got to see a lot of action in this one. Tricia is a great evil giantess, want to see more of her. Beth to the rescue, just in time too. She really is pushing for some tiny action, really forward. Glad to see Sofia at the end. Hoping the next chapter we get to see some good overbearing, controlling mom interactions. Great job as always.
Author's Response:
Tricia will make a bigger appearance in future chapters. She's not done yet!