[Report This]Date: August 09 2024 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
This story has the makings of a certified classic.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it thus far. Thanks so much for reading!!
Date: August 07 2024 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
Another great chapter. I’m glad they were able to make up after the fight while still standing their ground for their beliefs. I think she does have ryan’s back but is treating him differently because of his size either knowingly or not. I like it though, I like how confident and in charge she is while still being helpful and caring with ryan. All the while maintaining that teasing familiarity with her now shrunken brother. I cant wait to see the rest of ryan’s family, and I ESPECIALLY cant wait to see what happens with those nachos and beer Amanda is bringing home. Really hoping for another accident like from the sleeping chapter!
Author's Response:
I agree totally with your read on the situation. I think Amanda is just ignorant to the fact that she's crossing some boundaries, because she's not accustomed to being a functional authority. For her, it makes total sense that a good friend would do everything they can to prevent you from going back to their ex. But if you were to steal a friend's phone and hide it from them, they'd be rightfully pissed off.
Glad you're enjoying the story thus far, thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: August 04 2024 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ever since his mother's cruelty/disdain towards tinies was hinted at
in chapter one (“Oh come on. You’re her son. She wouldn’t… you know it’d
be different.”) I've been anticipating her making an unannounced visit
to Amanda's dorm, perhaps even failing to recognise him at first. She's
been brought up again in the last few chapters and I simply cannot wait
to see how that family dinner plays out.
Going back to Amanda and Ryan's recent spat of... for a better term, domestic violence and partner control. I'm surprised they both moved
past that as if nothing happened. Surely him being flicked full force and
launched several feet would be like you or me getting hit by a car. Wouldn't that result in bruised ribs at the very least?
Besides, she was acting like a cunt. I guess as an Australian I'm just taken aback by her violent overreaction to that word.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying thus far! Should be some interaction with the rest of the family coming soon. In regards to their argument, I don't think either of them have moved past it. Not all arguments are going to be finished in just one go. Amanda certainly has some things to answer for, her physical outburst included. But I'll also add that Ryan is not so fragile as you might think. While small, he's a bit more durable than his larger counterparts, so getting flicked around is less painful or debilitating than it would first appear. There's definitely some ethical concerns with Amanda flexing her superior size like that though. But she's the giant cute subject of our story so most people are going to be inclined to give her a pass.
And at the end of the day... it's smut. Just a bit of fun written by an amateur writer
P.S. As an American, I find Amanda's reaction to being called a cunt much more mild than you might expect around these parts. Different cultures I suppose lol.
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: August 04 2024 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Another great chapter with good set up, always a joy reading this honestly, just comes across as a very believable story.
You're doing well putting out a chapter a month, hopefully you're doing alright not to get burn out?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying! Unfortunately the time to write is a commodity these days, so the story schedule comes down to getting the chapter done and going back to discuss alterations and rewrites. I appreciate the patience and I'm glad you stick around to read each chapter. Thanks for reading!!