[Report This]Date: August 18 2024 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 4: Young Prodigy
Great story, hope you stick with it all the way. I like that isn't completely centered on the mc. The side characters all have their unique personalities (tinies&normals). Lola is my definitely my favorite, though it would be interesting to see some action from Olivia.
Only problem I have is with the verb tenses, which makes it slightly confusing at times.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Last chapter was fully focused on Lola, I'll try to have more Olivia on later chapters.
Well... since english wasn't my first language, I apologize for the mistakes about it. I'll do my best!
[Report This]Date: August 18 2024 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 4: Young Prodigy
OMFG, I love Lola, holy shit. She's the perfect blench of mischievousness, gentle, and ditzy that I love. There's something so endearing about the way she cares for her tinies but also abuses them - but not to be mean, but because she's overlooking how overbearing she could be.
I, of course, loved all the F/f interactions. Love me some mouth play and all the comments that allude to the tinies being tasty and a joy to suck on. The way Lola left both girls battered on her pillow and moved on, ignoring them, was just ... chef's kiss.
I liked the tension you built at the very end. Jesse's plan went to shit right away and was stuffed in cleavage. And just as Allen was about to escape, Lola made direct eye contact with him. And the, and then ... CLIFFHANGER. GahhhhHH! NOooo! I want to see Allen/Lola interaction! Gahhhhh. My heart!
Author's Response:
She's definitely my kind of giantess now! Just treating tinies as her personal toys is such a turn on XD